I love that last sentence. And I love how insecure Light is, and only lets it show in the dark... and to L of all people. And during all this, L is watching him, and calculating. Loved this!

sad and beautiful! i love drabble-ish stuff

It was sweet!
I liked it!

I love this one line in here..."tender venom".

How wonderfully hypocritical. :) Just lovely.

That was a great piece of writing. I enjoyed it very much.
However, i think the parenthesis kind of ruin the mood. The side notes shouldnt be added in the story unless it is really necessary. The plot is good and very solid. A bit melancholy though.
GoodJob!

~KimiNoTsuki

That was absolutley amazing! Seriously! Wow. I mean wow. I'm speechless. Completely bloody speechless.

That was really good. I loved it. Well done

Wow, this was good! Really well written To!
And I loved the last sentence!
Great job!

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I LIKED THIS. LOTS AND LOTS. XD

And yes, I too was amused to note how focussed L was on Light's insomnia and the causes while ignoring his own.

Light's last line breaks my heart. Because in those days when he forgets the Death Note, he really does despise Kira, and wants to fight with L against him. I wonder if it hurt at all when he found out he wasn't as innocent as he believed?

I loved how you kept them in character. Light and L were both amazingly written, and the scene weren't too drawn out, but they weren't too short. (: Loved it.

ohh bleak. and wonderful. reading it causes an almost pleasant ache.

That was so sad and beautiful. L/Light is probably one of the only pairings where, if done right, one can't really have a sense of complete satisfaction at the end. They completely belong to each other, but because of who they are, it's also wrong for them to be completely happy.

Great job on this one.

Really, really, really good. I love it when L and Light's relationship is portrayed in a darker way, such as this. It seems to fit more with their personalities than anything else. It's slightly depressing sometimes, but also far more interesting.
You have a small typo here, or at least it looks like one:
L releases Light's wrists, and slides himself down to -- L's -- groin. Taking no precautions in ripping off Light's boxers... etc.
Shouldn't the second L be Light?
That's it, thanks for the great story once again!

This story makes me cry.
Beautiful, beautifil. What more can I say? This is a first-class fanfic and a first-class lemon.
You inspire me. And LxLight forever!

I like all in your history! :)