I really like the dark feel of this story: it's a lot different from what I expected in a Robin Hood fanfic.

great twist plz write nad update soon

Also, choose two people and put them down as your main characters. Many people search for stories to read by character so those without chosen main characters that can be searched for are underread.

The more you write, the more people will review.

Your last chapter was completely underlined- in this font, it makes it much more difficult to read. I almost clicked 'Back' without reading a word. Grammar, spelling and punctuation are imperative, especially in early chapters.

Definite potential, but more must be written, and the first chapter reposted without the underlines would be appreciated and would encourage more people to read and review.

I did like that story a lot.

Very dark and a nice change from all the lovey dovey stuff!