This is my favorite of all the TSSC fics I've read, I think you captured both characters exceptionally. Good job!

You are definately becoming won of my role-models now.

This is exactly what it would be like if John and Cameron really got together in the series. Fantastic story, really sweet. I was worried it would be just sex for the hell of it but you managed to show how much John and Cameron really care for each other. Great job.

That was very sweet... Very well done :) It brought a smile to my face :D

I would pay millions for josh friedman to have put that first part in the actual show (when she throws riley out and "pounces") obviously the rest wouldn't make it on network TV but that first part would have been awesome to see!
and as to the more "intense" aspects of this story, i have to give you major kudos, i thought you wrote it very, very well and it was tastefully done and deeply romantic (so no i don't agree with your description of 'smut')
great job!

it was so SWEET, and innocent in a strange way. i was a little concerned with Riley's presence at the beginning but everything worked out just fine

I'm all John/Cameron but this was a little chilling for some reason.

nicely written and enjoyable, but left a metallic aftertaste that made it seem.. wrong somehow.

Wow. Am speechless. This was perfect. Really believable. I could see it happenening. Beautiful.

You are quickly becoming my favorite TSCC author and my TSCC role model :D

I loved this story, it was hot and it was fun!

good storyline, i liked it

Wow. I loved that. It was a; hot & b; really kind of sweet. =D

Wow, this one-shot was absolutely wonderful, I really liked it!

The plot was great, even though Riley was in it, hehe! The character portrayal and the interaction between them were also pretty great!

The whole love scene was pretty good as well, even though John did most of the work, because he needed to show her, but it was very sweet nonetheless and very nicely put together!

Good job! Ps. I'd also love too see more similar stories with John/Cameron!

Oh my. This was good. I liked John's uncertainty and the passivity of Cameron as she attempts to learn from John. Nice grasp of the characters.

Hello!! Nice seeing you finally making them together. I liked a lot the story, but I have to say it was a bit technical on the sex part. I mean, I would like better if it was more passionate. (I also couldn't stop thinking that Cameron already did it before, but with older John).
But I enjoyed and I honestly would like to sse more of them together on other stories :-)

Gah, this story is making me grin so much that my brother is actually staring at me from the other side of the room like I have a problem :D

Yay!! You just gotta love a good J/C once in a while, especially from yourself because you pull everything off flawlessly.

Fantastic job.

-- Gilmore

great story I like the way cameron choose to act when she wanted John as I had always envisioned it is a similiar manner her using her strengh to dominate him, or maybe thats just me. Good work!