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DevotedSerenity19
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Wow that was awesome
jillie
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
continue it please
SarcasticLoner
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
i loved this, who doesnt love angry tristan/rory interaction with major tones of sexual tension? i especially loved tristan's line of say hi to your boyfriend for me. lol i feel vaguely stalkerish, as this is the third story today i think ive reviewed for you...but i was re-reading can't stay away for approximatly the billionth time, as apparently cannot stay away (ironic eh?)and decided to read your other stories. I like how your stories are all different and dont always have the *perfect* ending. Good luck with your reposting.

~SarcasticLoner
Via
2008-12-22 . chapter 1
Great work, it doesn't feel AU at all, seems like something that could really happen between the characters.

I loved it so, of course, I'm begging for some sort of continuation, but I get that you don't want to write more. Your story is already perfect as it is :)
jillmarie724
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
I'd love to see this continued...I know it's a one-shot, but you can change that, right?
Alenor
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
hmm, interesting
RoxyLo
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
loved it.
:)
mo
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
You are back! Yaeh!
I would love something like this, where Rory is in control!
princetongirl
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
loved it update soon
KeitaWolf
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I'm so happy that you're finding copies of your old stories. I loved this one and am SOO happy to be able to re-read it again.

I hope everything works out for you :D

PS. Did you ever consider extending this? I mean it's a great one-shot, but there is an untold story here still, and I'd be very interested to see where you take it.
ess3sandra
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
DAMN! it's so hot. i really hope this will be a story and not just an onne-shot, it deserves to be told. well done!!
wittybanter
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Amazingly written as usual! I've always loved the way you portray Tristan and Rory together...desperate...longing...harsh...cold..passionate...needing...

great job
Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
That was really good!
Keep up the great work:)
Curley-Q
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I loved this, Please continue with a sequel. Possibly having Louise find out later on, lol
:)
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I think you should def. continue this story. Im always looking for a good friends with benefits between these two! Please continue it!!
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