Very interesting story. Very good!

Aw, that was cute although nothing really happened...

Nice little story. This was when I liked their interaction together. Well done.

Very sweet. And just long enough. This is a little gem!

Very nice, amd strong character development. Keep going I can't wait to read more.

Short but good! I love the end! Good job!

This was a good chapter. But I would love to read more about this story. I wish you would consider writing more chapters.

These kinds of stories are always fun to write. Short, but cute! I liked it!