People don't often take the time to understand just how important the Holidays are to mankind. They only think of the material factors of it. It's sad but I completely agreed with the message behind this story. I see a lot of myself in Chester. I was the same way as a little girl and still am as a adult...well except for the llama and sheeps and I don't have an older sister. It's frighting though how my little sister is very similar to Amy.

Very interesting story and definately creative. I like the different approach you take than most TNBC stories. The family is very realistic, especially the behaviors and thoughts of the child. I especially like that you have Chester paint his face pale like what he saw in the house. Again, I cannot express how much I enjoyed the originality of your story. Along the lines of creativity is using Santa as a chief character, and actually having more time on the page than Jack. I've only seen him in two other stories out of all 800-some written. Another thing I thought you did well was having the other children referred to by their costume instead of an acutal name. I also like that you only show the dark, frightening side of Jack. There's some really good detail in here, especially the part where he is on the porch of the old house and describing how his mother does everything in an old-fashioned way. This is a very good story and you are one awesome writer.

your story was really good. you captured the skeleton king perfectly. I'd like to read more but you only wrote one chapter. the situation you left chester in is interesting. i want to know what happens. a suggestion to you is: have chester go into the house to meet Jack but not on halloween, maybe like a week before. then have jack say nothing but lead chester into the woods and into Halloween Town. i suggest this because i am an extremely big fan of The Nightmare Before Christmas and would like to see you include more about halloween and Jack.

Well written, beautiful theme. Thanks.

Very creative.

Wow!

I applaud you on your creativness! That's probably the best fanfiction story on NMBC I've read!

I encourage you to continue with your writing and not to give up!

Yours trully!

Raven!:[

Um, sugary.

That is soooo sweet! I loved the way you wrote it. as linzy said, there aren't many writers like you in this category. It was a nice change. Most deffinetly a nice change. And I agree with the blooming one, you should put more time stuff in it so that you can follow what time of year it is.

Awesome! This kid is cool.

Aww that was cute! It was different than I expected and that's good. Good good.

Awwww, I luv this story! .

Great job, I hope to see more from you later...um..you will write more stories soon...wont you? Please? please please please!

Very good. I'm glad to see your imangination and spirt in this fic. I found it entertaining and I believe that you would be an excellent writer one day. Kudos to you.

awwwww! The ending was cute. infact, the whole thing had its cuteness, which isnt a bad thing. I liked the whole "well, who runs Halloween?" motive. It was very well writen and the plot was new and interesting. ME LIKE! _

that was a really nice story...i really liked it a lot...maybe you could write a sequel?

Raven

This is wonderful! I love it!