Nice cliffhanger ya got thar.

This is super good!

This is good. I've read something like it before, but they gave up after the 1st chapter. I'm glad yours has more. ;)

OMG! You must keep writing! Please!
*Getsonhandsandknees*
PLESE! Great Story!

This is super special awesome! Update soon please!

this chapter is great. lots of drama. update soon

Whoa; guess Raven isn't the only one with a worst enemy on his/her head.

Keep the good writing.

Unfortuantly I got it. Not that it had any affect on me I always hear that when someone says cliffhanger. Good chapter and Good story overall. Keep up the good work.

interesting story.
I got the reference. I think the show was called In between the Lions.
I could be wrong.
hope you update soon.

I got the reference, I just forget what show I remember it from. Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Yea, its that from that library show with the lions...

Anyways,

*ahem*

I CANT BELIEVE YOU'RE JUST LETTING US HANG THERE LIKE THAT!

Poor Raven...

WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU!

But I loved this chapter the most. What's Negative doing? Beast Boy's
Transformation: demon creatue/animal, I presume

UPDATE SOON! YOU MUST! I COMMAND YOU!

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Have a nice day!

:)

Is it sad that Starfire wanted to do the exact thing I would?
And yes, I get the reference. The cliffhanger segment on that show about Lions in a Library, right?

Good job. Some sort of demon looking form.

Very good extra scene with Robin and Star.

M... yeah, Negative resents that Raven didn't comfort BB like he did when Malchior betrayed her.

Keep the good writing.

aww... poor Negative... *hugs*