that was hilarious

WOW...wow tat was really good!! I wish it was longe but I won't complain! I hope everything wrk out with you and I review your next chap.!!

OMG! I love this! Please update soon. I thought they were going to pop up and yell, "You just got Punk'd!"
Update!

Yay! this chapter was great:) haha, that was hilarious, jessica finally got what she wanted and didn't know what to do with it!! loved the line:
"like a bunny facing a hawk" -- great description!!

so sorry to hear about your parents divorce...mine did a few years back and it was pretty rough. but now they are both happy, so I guess it was worth it in the end. i'm still sad about it sometimes, but it gets better. lean on your friends and reviewers--we'll cheer you up!!

and now...to cheer you up, a funny story about my cat squeaky:
he is not yet a year old, so he is very playful. he likes to jump on the banister post by the stairs in my house cuz it is pretty big and he can sit on it. But sometimes I hang my coat on it because it is a really good place to hang a coat when I am too lazy to put it away in the closet. and my winter coat is kind of slippery material on the inside...hehehe. So yesterday I had my coat on the post and squeaky decided he wanted to jump up there. He took a running jump and landed on top of the coat...which slid off the post and he fell on to the floor! He was going so fast, he then slid across the hallway straight into the wall! He was fine...he just got up, looked at me and then jumped back up onto the post like nothing happened! he is a very strange cat, he always makes me laugh. that probably isn't as funny written as when it happened, but I hope it made you laugh a tiny bit :)

Awesome chapter.

Your hilarious.


Sincerely,
Kya

Hilarious chapter. Loved it. The jokes and stunts weren't over done or overly complicated, had a very simplistic feel to it and was easily read, the hilarity of it came across effortlessly and felt very natural as well. :)

Loved this chapter and all the characters were spot on, nothing said or done out of place. The warning at the start was perfect, they all knew it would cause issues for their loved ones if they didn't clearly explain it wasn't true t all. Also loved the reasoning behind it, why not Jessica, they did Mike, fair is fair. :P

So a very good chapter, like usual, funny jokes that didn't feel forced or over the top, had great flow and pace, was superbly written. :)

So sorry to hear about your parents, its never fair on the children. I had it easy, grown up with out my dad... I know its not worth much but you will get better, the days wont feel as hard as time goes on. :) *hugs and love* And rely on your friends, their there for you, you can lean on them, they wont break.

hahahaaha i LUVVz the Jacob thing cuz hes an ass

HaHa sucks for Emmett! This was pretty funny! If i were Alice,Bella,or Rose i would have been hella pissed and smacked those boys for what they did then i would forgive them and start laughing! Oh and once again I'm sorry about your parents. (Gives a big bear hug)! I love your story and update when you can okay? See you tomorrow at school!

haha that was so funny! I was cracking up :) i hope we get to see more from the spy cameras in Mikes room. maybe you could do a scene where jasper and edward use their powers like jasper makes people do crazy things because he affects their feelings and makes them fall in love with something weird or get scared at a stupid time, etc. and maybe the boys could walk around in a crowded area and edward could answer peoples thoughts but make it seem like he was just talking to jasper and emmett...

update son!

this was great...the extra detail was wonderful! peter and charlotte...id have never guessed that!!

oh so funny! who is taping...maybe carlisle? i hope you do the shopping cart stuff...that always cracks me up! or swallowing weird things and taking xrays...haha

haha! this was great :) i can't wait to read more, such a good idea of course Emmett would do this!

UPDATTEE!Ths story is amazingly awesome! Jacob covere in turkey guts! LOL!

hey it's me lindsey and i just want to say what a funny story! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

that was funny you did great i can't wait to go on to the next chapter.^_^