Love your style!

Amazing! I am absolutely in love with this one-shot...awesome writing and the descriptive characterizations makes the romance oh-so heartwarming.

great great job! :)

another great story from you. thanks!

Brilliant.
You are one of the most talented writers on here :)

Funnyy, and poignantly sweet.


I enjoyed the characterizations, though I felt there was an inordinate lack of wizardry--Not that it particularly bothered me much, but I would've expected little things at least to be a given with a wand (such as levitating the furniture--still allowing the option of facial bruising; the leaking sink ("a few well-placed spells"), and Draco's disconcerting use of "Jesus" (I can see him mocking her with the use, but I'd expect him, as a "Pureblood," to automatically (at the dumpster) use another epithet...I dunno, maybe Zeus? A lot of fics use "Merlin;" JKR doesn't curse. ;D)...

Well I just had a lot of time and I wanted to complain, but I really, really liked this. The humor was especially fantasmically done ;D
I hate crumpets, but I love this fic. XD


♥Ellae

Very cute and sweet. Loved it :)

I've read through a few stories of yours now (Everybody Wants to Rule the World, with the white pill bottles, was my first) and you have an uncanny sense of realism. There's ...little to no physical displays of magic in your fics.

But that's only because all the magic happens inside the characters, and between them and your love stories really are the sweetest.

Sweetest might actually be the wrong word. Bittersweet? Not even that; it's painfully realistic. It's like Carl Jung, and the collective unconscious - I feel like this has happened to me before, or could happen in the future.

“You’re the fish, and the fisherman – and so am I.”

“You wanted to catch, and be caught. Both, at the same time. You just needed someone to do the same. To be there.”

Those lines reminded me of John Donne's "The Bait."

Great story! :) Any chance on an update for "If It Was You" ever? ;P

Woah. You're great.

I love dysfunctional people... mainly because we're all dysfunctional people.
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It was really, really cute, though some lines are rather confusing. It's funny too.

Oh, this was great! I loved it just as I love every other one of your stories. Draco and Hermione are just awesome.

Aww your stories always evoke a lot of emotions in the audience. Keep up your talent :)

Oh! This is absolutely excellent. I love everything I read of yours. :)

So cute! I love the way you describe Hermione's feelings... aw, I love this story.