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xDarklightx
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
I like it a lot. Question, is there a sequel or partner story to this as of what happens after?
Lightest'Ink
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
::sniffle:: That. Was beautiful. ::sobs uncontrollably::
nupinoop296
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
Aw! Cute ending! Very nice fic! :D

D: Yami's being such a jerk! Ryou didn't do anything!

I don't think I got any of the symbolism...
Vaseshipper
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Very, very beautifully done! :-) SO SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME!

I care for them both.
BlackWolfHowling
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
What? No 'Bakura attacks the Pharaoh for what he did to Ryu' scene that severely wounds him? I was looking forward to it.
Flame05
2008-12-02 . chapter 1
That was fun to read. XD poor Ryou
AirGirl Phantom
2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Wow, I really loved the whole Yami/Hikari thing going on in this story. There were some really profound thoughts in here. I think you portrayed Bakura's emotions very accurately. It wasn't too affectionate, but still very clear that some sort of bond was forming.

Reading this makes me kinda wonder: are Ryou and Bakura really the strange ones, with a shaky bond? Or are Yuugi and Yami the strange ones, because they have somehow found a way to have an affectionate bond despite their natural differences? ...Of course, that's probably just me babbling, but it just shows how very thought-inducing your story was. Excellent job!
emo-foxkitten
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
holy **! that was good!
Always a Bookworm
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed reading that- well done! I felt so sorry for poor Ryou, though!
Loverly Light
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Note to self: always be the first to review your fics, because my reviews pale in comparison. -.-
Anyway, this fic was completely wonderful. Just... yeah. Very awesome. I loved every bit of it. ^^ (Except the part with Yami- that was well-written, but I don't like how he didn't trust Ryou... T.T)
Determined
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I liked it un! Ryou's breakdown was tragic and poetic; Bakura's explaination was great~
Yunagirl07
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
This story was so great, I added it to my favorites.
I love the way you described Ryou's emotions and I felt so bad for him...poor Ryou.
But this was absolutely wonderful, you have a great way with words.
xnightmare'sxnightmarex
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Hey, what an awesome story you have here. Its absoulutly amazing. I loved how you desrcibed the Hikari/Yami bond...I am at a loss for words which is really rare for me. Excellent job, I felt so bad for Ryou when the stupid Pharaoh was saying those things about him. >.< Well anyway great job!

One thing though: 'Konnichiwa' means 'Hello'. I know I'm going to sound annoying, but actually "Konnichiwa" means "good afternoon" not "hello". But other than that, fantastic story!
millenniumthief
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
That was incredible...I've never been too good at picking up hidden themes, but I do recognize the truth in it. The lighter side of myself always wars with how mean I can be, and while I hate that I can allow myself to feel such a way, I don't actually hate myself. It's my "lighter" personality that becomes the mask of my emotions, too...

I honestly tried three times to read this, and I kept getting interrupted. I'm so glad I could finally finish it! It was absolutely amazing!

Yes!! Another update for "Rescue Me"! I can't wait! I'll see you then!
RyouLoverForever
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Wow... just... wow! This is an amazing fic! Man, I can't articulate how much I loved this fic! (Quick Note: to Freisturz - I'm sorry YOU didn't enjoy this fic, but I don't think you should have reviewed like that. If you're not in the mood, wait or don't review, especially if you didn't even finish it! It sets a false impression for other readers. And you're wrong about the mistake.)
You kept everyone in character while presenting the situation, a challenge for most people. I felt so sad for Ryou after what Yami said to Yuugi. You explained Ryou's emotions wonderfully.
The same follows for Bakura. The second part of the story was what made me favorite this. I love Bakura's struggle between his disgust for Ryou's 'weakness' and his natural protectiveness as a yami (which, of course, he's trying to deny). And you did it all without turning this yaoi! The highest praise for that alone! I loved how he finally called Ryou by his name at the climax of the argument. So very well done!
You're right; there are many hidden themes in this fic. Let me mention a few I liked particularly. I loved how a part Ryou's personality has become Bakura, and in a small way, vice versa. It can be seen in Ryou's original inclination to even eavesdrop, and the fact the he was justifying it. Subtle, but there. ^^ I also appreciated Bakura's explanation of the relationship between hikaris and yamis. That was brilliantly written. Last, I love the symbolism in the title: HikariYami. I don't know if this was intentional, but it seems to embody the theme that the personality of the hikari (in this relationship, at least) is victorious over the darker personality.
Again, I can't say how much I enojyed this fic, and recommend it to every Ryou-Bakura fan!
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