Please Countine this it really good and verry interesting to read :)

airbags cannot hold air, they inflate and then they deflate right away they have exaust holes

good story however I don't believe Toyota had the Prius in 2004.

LOVE the story and your talent at writing! Please update soon.

You've got relatively few mistakes. I'd just look carefully at problems like: your/you're, 'their/they're and finally don't forget the possessive 's.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ooh! I really love this story so far! Please update soon!

Next Chapter, Please. I am begging you. *Gets on hands and knees ans begs* Please

DANGIT! why did it have to stop there? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
ASOTA

This story is great, just found this website, can't wait for you to post the next chapter, pleae do it soon.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

That was great! Amazing job! Please update as soon as you can, I really wanna know whats gonna happen next!
-claire

Can't say I blame Don - and I am surprised Colby didn't - wanna punch that jerk.

Good read, and yes, the mistakes will need to be corrected. (Ain't typos a b-b-b-bother?)

Nice job, Jess! Looking forward to more!

OMG poor charlie is hurt and now alone! Let's hope rescue will come soon. As for Don...I love when he's in big brother mode! XD He's so protective of his younger sibling! I can't wait to read his reaction when the FBI is gonna find Charlie! XD He'll be a mother hen! XD
anyway Update soon!! I'm really curious to know what happens next!

Awesome chapter, Can'T wait for the next one!

Hi! Great chapter! I really enjoyed reading it! Hmm...I sense more whumping on the horizon. *grin* Thanks for a great update!