please please update soon!

umm... will Bella be a nurse?

It IS different, but I'm really enjoying it. It's clearly been well researched, and you're an excellent writer. The descriptions paint vivid pictures, the dialog natural and easy.

I started reading it, because I'm writing a story similar to this in one crucial way...the closed, damaged heart opening slowly. In my writing it's Bella whose heart is dead, following an abusive relationship, and Edward's presence and words are healing.

I thought it would be interesting to read just to see how you were handling those same themes, but instead, I'm just gripped. Can't wait to read more. :)

I love this story so far! Please tell me you haven't given up on it... It's too good for it to go unwritten. Let me know! -Stacey-

Emmett will be Emmett even in war !Like Samuel too but have a feeling you'll kill him off !Jasper's cute in wanting to propose as soon as he gets back !Please continue this story !It's great!

Really liked your idea for this story !Like that Esme is his aunt and Carlisle his uncle and that they have that love at first sight thing going ! And love that Edward's a hopeless romantic.That was funny how he bolted from that woman !

AW... jasper sounds like a sweetie! :)

awsome it sounds pretty good but when will they meet?? please update soom!!

this story has caught my attention. I can't wait to read more. please update soon!

Ha ha love it. Emmett can find humor in almost anything, even war. Gotta love it. Awesome chap.

Wow, wow, wow. Great job. I can visualize this story so easily it honestly feels like I'm watching a movie. All the details, from the rickety wooden crate to the ankle deep water to the descending whistle which haunted Edward's nightmares to the buzzing in his ears to everything else! It's all just excellent Ellie and gives the perfect WWI feel.

It was a great idea to start this chapter right in the action of it all. The contrast between this Edward and the Edward from the first chapter is tangible. It's powerful to go from one to the other instantly like this.

I loved how he brought up that his father would be ashamed of him during the poker game. It brought in some humour, but it was also a nice, personal touch--even thought it was just small. I LOVED these next few parts: "A part of me wanted to disagree, we were already there", "the waiting…God, the waiting. Waiting to be relieved, waiting for some action, waiting for death…it had all become a never-ending torment." "The young man who’d stood in line that warm summer’s day, dreaming of adventure had drowned in his idealism and I was what was left; a broken shell held together by the strength of his friends and the idea of home. So hell? Definitely already there." Those were just absolutely great parts Ellie. It totally made me empathize with Edward and helped to know exactly how he's feeling.

"This was the fifth time in a week he’d interrupted us while I was on a winning hand and if I didn’t know any better, I’d say he was doing it on purpose. Just another torment to add to the list." I liked this little commentary from Edward! Like another poster already commented, the humour is perfect for this type of story and for this chapter in particular. Plus, it completely felt like something Edward from the books would say so I was happy that you're keeping him the same that way. :)

The paragraph where Edward described his 3 friends was just so well done. In just a few sentences, it brought us up to speed on the characters and let us know how important they each are to Edward in their own way. I loved it.

I totally laughed when you had Emmett calling Edward Eddie. My husband does that all the time to tease me, and I correct him everytime! 'Um, It's Edward thank you very much. NOT Eddie or Ed'. haha I was happy that Edward wants to keep using his full name too. ;) It was super cute that he countered with Emmie.

Since I'm rambling now, the last line I'll say that I loved is "I envied the small twinkle that appeared in his eye when he thought of her." That just speaks volumes about Edward and again, is the Edward I already know and love. :)

(I love your new picture on your homepage! Combining Edward, Bella, Troy and Gabriella is genius!)

Oh, this is off to a great start. I like the little historical touches you put in such as Theda Bara. I'll be sure to keep up with this fic!

I *love* your writing style. Not many stories include the actual experience of the war, and in a way that I can't possibly fathom, you've somehow managed to combine the horrors of WWI with a funny kind of dry wit. Keep it up! (And please don't kill Samuel, though I have a bad feeling about it anyway.)

Update when you have time; I'll be here to r&r!

awesome fanfic

an interesting twist on the Twilight story. i like it ;]
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I love this story!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!