wow great fic i really like lawliet's deductive abilities like you have potrayed in this story
extremely interesting
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Absolutely astounding! The entire story is amazing! Please keep writing, I'm very enthralled by it all! Thank you for writing this!

Young L... interesting

i like this story!

very good story!!

MWhaha, you're in for it now Watari !

I love the early L development and plot. Its quite original and entertaining to see Watari and L in the beginning. Very well done! Please continue!

I love L, and his talk about such things as the "comfortable shelter with an inordinate amount of delightful confectionary."

I have to wonder why Wammy wouldn't have adopted anyone before this, though. If you're of the mind to adopt, it's not generally the most efficient course of action to wait until you find a mistreated kid in the asylum you fund.

Always,
Robert Mason

haha i'm looking forward to the quirky questions Lawliet will ask. Also, i'm not really seeing the plot here. Are you going to show him growing up till he's about 20 years old?

You want us to update...on reviews, no? XP

Anyway, haha, nice chapter--I like Watari's backstory. He had to do "sinful" things to be happy. XD I just love this story, it's so intriguing. Update soon! :D

This is the most wonderful Death Note story I've read in a long time! I really love your take on Lawliet's past, I've never seen it done like this before! My favorite line in the whole story had to be:

"You consider having your charge beat you with a stick and then carry your broken remains back to the house as…bonding?!"

That line had me laughing! I hope you update this soon; I can't wait to read more of it!

Great job on the chapter! I love te idea of a Watari pinata. thwack! :D Update soon!

This is very interesting, I would like to read more! :D Excellent job so far, keep up the hard work and all!

Thats so cute...but sad...in a way...please write more please ;D

LOL that was funny. I can imagine L hitting Watari with a stick...