Reviews for Voyage of the Doomflower
cryptologicalMystic 9/5/11 . chapter 2
Wow. :D
HeCallsMeHisChild 11/27/09 . chapter 2
All I have to say is LOL. Thank you for the much-needed smile.
no account 6/18/09 . chapter 2
This is hilarious!
Tollian 3/28/09 . chapter 2
This is one of the cleverest stories I have ever read, no joke. I loved every bit of it and really must congratulate you. The flow was nice, the style of writing with all the added ' . . . eth's for Zim and acknowledged oddities (South America indeed), and not to mention it was hilarious. All the characters were in character, something I would imagine would be hard to do in such a weird situation, and, well, everything was just great. I can't really think of anything to improve, except Ms. Bitters seemed kind of nice (but I suppose that could be contributed to the fact she has to deal with the class two days less). Also, before I stop, I have to thank you for adding Tak and Skoodge. Sorry this is so long, but I really thought this story was worth it.
The Illustrious Crackpot 2/21/09 . chapter 2
Yet another double-dosage of pure, unbridled excellence. XD I was laughing like crazy the whole time I was reading this; it helped that it's only been a few months since my latest history teacher covered the Puritans. Great job!

(Oh, and I'm flattered that you put my pic as your icon; but really, all credit goes back to you, because if you hadn't written that great drabble, the pic would never have been drawn in the first place. :) )
Maran Zelde 12/17/08 . chapter 2
I just now noticed you updated this.

"...You know...Indian goggles. Or something." ROFL

Great story; consistantly hilarious.
Liani Risate 12/6/08 . chapter 2
This is so funny! There should have been an episode like that.
RadaVonVon 12/5/08 . chapter 2
... I call Christmas.

x3
invaderzimfannumber1 12/4/08 . chapter 2
I loved Dib's indian name and that is so true about the whole after the first thanksgiving we pilgrams destroyed the indians hey that mean that I am part plig-irken and part native-human because I have some indain blood in me and then some skot-irish and germen blood in me. This was great I hope you get to my story tommorrow and I hope to see a pm from you tommorrow morning until then this is invaderzimfannumber1 signing off.
xxGuardianWolfxx 12/4/08 . chapter 2
This was a pretty hilarious story. It was an interesting take on the Thanksgiving story Invader Zim-ified. Loved it, plain and simple. Continue with your holiday fics! Christmas is coming up. I definitly want to see what you can come up with for that.
little girl-GROWN UP 12/4/08 . chapter 2
lol

Yes, I laughed. I can't remember the parts where I really laughed, but I did.

And I know that the whole Thanksgiving-business is indeed a serious topic, considering everything what happened between the immigrants and the Native Americans.

Okay I guess that's it.
Maran Zelde 11/27/08 . chapter 1
Haha, this is funny.

"You know as well as I do that the Keef-boy has no brain fit for consumption!"

"Oh, good," Keef said, looking relieved.

And Fangs-taking! LOL

"Hyeh?" He sat up. "Aren't we doing Noah's Ark?" Hahaha!

Aw, I can picture Zim and Gir in pilgrim outfits, and they look so adorable!

I think it's a little rushed when it jumps to the Pilg-Irkens freezing on Earth. I would've liked to see a little bit of them building their cabins and forming their new society. On the other hand, the rushed-ness could be excused by the fact that this is Zim's dream, and dreams aren't known for their good pacing and plotting. ;)
Angel's Nocturne 11/26/08 . chapter 1
Aw! *can't stop laughing* I absolutely LOVE this! It flows just like an episode would, and I enjoyed the appearance of King Purple and King Red (and their declarations about snacks and sex orgies ). Hopefully you will put up a Part II, because to end it here would be very uncool. THIS HERE STORY MUST BE FINISHED! ... ETH! XD

Awesome one-shot! Hope you get a chance to update soon!

Angel-chan-chan
invaderzimfannumber1 11/25/08 . chapter 1
That was good I wonder why was Zim called Rev. Zim I guess I need to pay more attention to the whole first Thanksgiving story. Well I can't wait for part two I bet it will make me laugh just as much as this you really know how to do the charaters well and so do I well until next time this is invaderzimfannumber1 signing off.
little girl-GROWN UP 11/25/08 . chapter 1
Okay. Well, we hadn't been talking that much about the Mayflower in our English class but this was just... amazing! Yes it was, the way how you made Rev. Zim speak- And I liked the puny-tans (lol). Even though we don't celebrate Thanksgiving as you do this is going to be one of my favourites
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