Awesome chapters.

I love this. and iruka's reply, even if i't isn't the truth. that's a slightly ambiguous statement in your A/N- are you referring to Iruka and Temari and this chapter, or life in general?
great writing.

Great as usual.

A little depressing, cousin. Never mind, I still like it.

Absolutely wonderful. I loved this.

Really nice, I think deep down despite her cold and unfeeling attitude the little things give Temari away. You get this across with her character so well.

I really liked this.

Really nice. Something about it was very poigant, behind the smaller gestures.

I agree with your statement. You can't expect to be noticedif you always hide behinds things.

I like this, how Temari does things so callously like she did at fifteen. You write both characters so well.

Really strange, but captured the modo perfectly.

You've just made me love IruTema!

Nicely done.

M. I liked the softer side of Temari in this, was very sweet. Not many people can pull that off. How she wants this to last is just testiment to how very human she can be at times, and not many people explore that side of her.

Temari's sweeter side was really explored in this, how she wants a relationship after the one with her family didn't work at first seems really prominent. I like it a lot.