Interesting fic; I like the writing style you have used!

Wow, I'm honored. Thanks for the dedication!

I loved the idea, Jimmy/Crake ftw! Or Jimmy/Glenn, however it works. I like it, though; that's my main point.

It gets a bit unclear in the middle what's going on, so you might want to consider starting new paragraphs every time a new person speaks. And I'm not quite sure about the flower bit, but the rest of it does sound quite Crake-like.

Good job; I'm glad to finally have more in this section!

It's an interesting idea, but you need to work on your formatting a little. And try to make your ideas a bit clearer, as it's a little hard to follow.