Aw. Adorable, just... adorable. *feels all warm and fuzzy inside* They're both so in character, I can just picture the whole scene in my mind. "Return" isn't a bad title, though I think something along the lines of "what am I going to do with you" would be cute too. ^_^ Anyways, A+! <3

Haha, that was very cool. You write both Kati and Patrick exactly as I imagine them. There's a serious deficit of Kati and/or Patrick fanfiction out there, so thank you for writing this.

My only criticism is Patrick calling Kati by her Japanese rank. Yeah, it brings a familiarity from the anime, but aside from the fact that the show is recorded in Japanese, it doesn't really add anything to the story or their characters. It's pretty ambiguous what language they're supposed to be speaking anyway as Patrick and Kati are French and Finnish respectively, but it's unlikely they're speaking Japanese. Since you're writing the story in English, Colonel would word just as well.

Besides that minor gripe, your story was really fun and I'd love to see more Kati/Patrick fics from you!

Yes, that's our Patrick.
Yes, that's our Kati.
I'm giving you 10 points.

Hm...good, cute fic. I do suggest getting a beta reader though to rectify a few typos here and there. Also, I'd refere to her as "colonel" instead of "taisa" since G00 is getting a dub release and neither character is Japanese. :p Anyway, I heart Patrick and Kati. They're nmy favorite couple after Setsuna and Marina (a pairing I only really like because it's so much like Heero and Relena xD) Kati/Patrick is so adorable though! Excellent work story-wise. I can totally picture this happening. :)

*squees* I love Patrick! He's so dumb, but so sweet, and he's really devoted to Kathy. And you can tell she likes him back...he's the sort of person you can't not like, if that makes sense. I'm glad he's back with her, as he's just what she needs right now ^^
please write again soon!

Hah hah, I already read this via Gundamm00 LJ, but I figured I show my love here too. I love this pairing, and thought your portrayal of Patrick is great!