:/ Hmm...A little confused here as well. The characters it says your story's about (near top of story, next to genre) are Sanji and Kuro...Neither have shown up. Now, it's not that I'm doubting these two will be involved or anything, but I'd like to know when they'll be included? :/ And, if they're on their way to the Baratie, where's Usopp anyway? Is he on the ship...? Like I said, confused...
:) However, you're grammar and spelling are excellent. And I find your character Midoriiro to be very interesting and realistic. Luffy and his crew are also very in-character.

This story has a lot of potential. ^^ I'm just waiting for questions to be answered.

Looking forward to your reply. :]

~Trilby.

Hmm, I'm somewhat confused at what's going on here but otherwise imressed. Though you could have described the scene at the beginning a bit to clear up some confusion of mine.