Just a few spelling and grammar errors:

Coruscant- not Courascant.

"The Laws of fate, (they are)" since this is plural you use they (not that) and (are- because you are using they).

Ha, ha. Ahsoka asks many good questions. It is always quite entertaining to read. Obi-Wan always seems to get the most troublesome padawans. It's unfortunate that in the original story it had to end badly since Anakin could have done better than he did.

That aside, I greatly enjoyed this chapter and I will read more later.

Best,

-Don "QuixoticQuest" =)

Koon seems to have his head on right in this case. Well spoken, Master Koon.

Hmm, it does seem strange that nobody would have noticed that Anakin and Padme were having a secret relationship, let alone a marriage, which requires legal documents, which means it had to have been written somewhere for it to be legitimate.

In one sentence you write "lye" instead of "lie." I would suggest using spell check for grammar and mechanics, it would help to make sure you don't have any errors when you load your document beforehand.

That aside, this was a great chapter and I look forward to reading the next segment.

-Don "QuixoticQuest" =)

Wow, what a turn of events. I feel badly for Ahsoka and Obi-Wan, that last line Obi-Wan said resonated with me, it's so true.

Again, I would suggest going through and clearing up any tense issues (you keep switching between past and present and it can be a little jarring at times as well as confusing).

Otherwise, nice job. You do a good job of getting right into feelings of all the characters and making the reading care about what's happening.

Awesome chapter!

-Don "QuixoticQuest"

Firstly I'd like to say I like the start of this story. It focuses on one of the scenes from ROTS and then it has a twist. Always fun to do that.

My only critique would be that you have a few tense problems near the end of the fic.

Otherwise this jumps right to the chase and into the action.

Nice!

-Don "QuixoticQuest" =)

no joke, i have a friend who has a HUGE crush on you!

Well, well, soldier...

Here I am, again. LOL

And boy, this thing was AW3SOME!

Very intense, very dramatic, very sweet and intriguing.
All in all: it was pure WIN! LMAO

And also, everythin' was so well-written that...well...things felt like they could've ACTUALLY happened in the series! ROFL
And of course, the Ahsoka/Anakin FLUFF was N-I-CE! The wedding ceremony was B-E-A-Utiful!
And the clone commandos were looked pretty bad(a)ss. ROFL

So, outstanding piece of work, marine! You did great!
Now, I'm off to review the sequel. I'm on a roll! ROFLMAO

Once again, nice work.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Wow, this story was superb! I can't wait to read the sequel.

Thankyou for a wonderful story.Looking forward to your next
one.

Eyy Sequel, this oughta be interesting. >.> <..<

An awesome end to the story!

I can't wait for secrets of the Ancients. I wonder who the secret Empire is!

Also, I found the introduction to the Republic Commandos quite cool...and I like the fact you included 'Dexter's Diner' into this. ;P

Just let me know when the sequel is up.

Amazing story! Can't wait for the sequel!

Glad to see you're back this chapter was well worth the wait. I heard about all that stuff happened life does tend to get in the way of things we want to do. I don't know if you kept up with my story and it's sequel but if you did you'll see I've run into a writers block the last chapter I wrote was an epic failure to all the others if you have any suggestions on where I could take it please tell me, because I really don't want to put it on hiatus. Anyways great ending to a great story looking forward to the sequel I'll put you on my authors alert so I'll know when it's out.

A very nice fic i cant wait to read the sequel and have a look at my SW fic A Forbidden Love which has evil Anakin/Ahsoka as a secondary pairing.

Great Story! Loved it. Looking forward to the next story!

Keep it up ^^