So well written what the team is thinking. It was an outstanding episode on TV. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Great story :)

LOVE THIS STORY! I loved how you showed it from everyones perspective. That episode is one of my all-time favorites. Makes me cry everytime, but I love it.

This was excellent, thanks for writing it. I loved the POV's of each one. Then the POV changing to show Gibbs going in and willing Tony to live. It's like Lethal Weapon 4 "Will me Riggs" loved that part of that movie.

Then back to the POV and Tony beating all odds...Bravo! Sue

oh wow, that was awesome. I just wanted to cry especially at Kate's POV. It's so sad to know that she was going to be one of the next bodies on Ducky's tables