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Suphlatus
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
Creepy. Very creepy. And completely in character. Well done.
Aloony
2009-10-14 . chapter 1
Wow. Congratulations, you've successfully made me feel something beyond annoyance for 'MisaMisa-chan'. I'm kind of shocked. It's painful how she thinks that neither Kira nor Light will allow the 'pervert-stalker' to get away with kidnapping her and then later, when she sees what L is to him and how she can never even compare...*sigh* You have a way of focusing on the side-characters (because all but L and Kira are really just props) in a way that throws even more light (pun not intended) and attention on Ryuzaki and Light's private universe. It's so terribly wonderful and addicting.

The last part 'Convenience' was like twisting the knife in deeper after such a horrifying, fascinating story. Amazing. Thank you again. ^-^
The Girl Who Never Learns
2009-09-22 . chapter 1
Good~
Coco-Minu
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
I really like this. Quite dark, but still wonderful.
MichiyoSN
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
Best Misa-FF I have ever read.
I love especially the last part. It's so true.
Aosugiru Sora
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
The one-sided love of Light and Misa is oh so tragic. But it was displayed wonderfully here.
Schermionie
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
This is so... emotional. All the words stand out to form the separate parts of Misa and Light's relationship, and each one is sad and amazingly in-character. I've never read a story in which Misa was examined so wonderfully, making this yet another one of your stories to go on my faves list.
Snoaz
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I liked all parts, but especially the last one.

(When people ask Misa in an interview what her favourite body part is, she’ll tell them her boyfriend loves her eyes, that he fell in love with them first and the rest of her later. Light will read it and laugh until he’s breathless.)

So sad... but so true. Light is truly evil.
Stubbel
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Light will read it and laugh until he’s breathless.

Now the only question is wether he laughs because it's true or because she really seems to think that he ever fell in love with her. (The later I think, but who knows ;) )
Anyway, this was a great story, the best Misa characterisation I've ever read, in fact. And your Light is exactly like the one in the Manga and L. I can't even begin to talk about L! (Mostly because I'd never be able to stop *drop*)
And the scars on Lights wrists and that he thinks about killing Misa while having sex with her (and he actually tells Ryuk about it!) and - I just really love this fic to teensy tiny pieces!
Thank you so much for writing it!

(And consider this a huge praise because I hate Misa, but your one is just so right! I will read this again and again and forever!)
caveat lector
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
Wow... just... wow.
I love this so much. The way you portray Misa is so extremely realistic, and it really makes up for the fact that she's usually labeled as just a stupid model with a crush on Light. Very intense, as well. Those paragraphs at the end of every part really were amazing and incresibly deep.
Best Misa-fanfic I've ever had the pleasure to read.
Countess Karnstein
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
That was great, :D
blue-candle
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
I think it's beautiful :P
Juniper11
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
I just found this so sad. Her love for him is desperate and kind of tragic.

Yet I still love it.
Angel-wing2
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
Oh...this is disturbingly good. Though I like this pairing, this is actually a more accurate portrayal of what they're really like, unfortunately. Good work!~
NX-Loveless-XN
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
Her eyes and maybe her imaginary friend.
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