Pfft. James is such a mother ** sometimes. :D Anyways, I loved this story. It was a good AU. That's a rare thing in James-and-Lily-lived fics.

a good story, definitely, but somewhat curt, abrupt. You would do well, if you expanded it a bit. Some more scenes for example, more of what people do and feel.

You really should consider a different writing style. By jumping scenes and just driving the plot through the dialogue you're making it hopelessly vague and difficult. There is no background information on the characters or the plot, which makes it difficult for us readers to understand the choices your characters make. Further more their interaction lacks passion and quite frankly makes the story a bit cold, standoffish and very un-personal.
Only suggestions I have to making it better is reading up on human reactions/relations and practice placing yourself in your characters stead.

Cheers!

This was a great fic, however, please do an epilogue or something to show what happened to split James and Lily up and what will happen to James' other kids and to Harry and Severus.

oh... liking the mystery.

wow! i love AU fics, but this is just... wow.

Good story! Very good plot! Nicely written too! I've only got good things to say about this fic! I loved it! Though I hated the fact was such a bastard to Harry but it matched well with the bitterness I'm sure he felt at his own situation and the way his character was portrayed by Rowling. A pretentious bastard seems to be a fit description!

Julianne

Such a bittersweet ending.

Woot! That was awesome! A way for Lily and James to still be alive and Voldemort thought Neville was the one in the prophesy and wow!! Amazing work!