God, that’s an awesome story! It’s like you actually watch it on TV. And Cox is so like his usual cranky self! Morgan’s character is cool, I like how she’s acting around him, it’s so believable! Gosh, Jordan is really mean, isn’t she? I’m so much looking forward the new episode! Please, please continue, and update soon (I just think I might die of curiosity of what’s going to happen next!) Hey, what about Cox/Morgan relationship? Will she finally ask him out? And is there a continuation of David’s disease plotline? So, I’m waiting for a new story, hopefully it’ll be soon!

Don't drop the voice over! It's so completely SCRUBS-like! I love this series! You should bring JD back as a minor character, with that you could have her connect the dots and she'll learn the history of the hospital. I bet you could get some good jokes that way!

I swear to God, if you're secretly giving us actual scripts to future Scrubs episodes, I'm going to have to hurt you for spoiling me! These are so well written that they could be confused for actual scripts!!

great ep. can't wait till the next one! :)

-TheWorld

Aw, I feel so sorry for Morgan! Jordan was being so mean (But when is she not?). I like Morgan's Grandfather and I liked the 'friendship' between Mr Corman and Eddie.
Can't wait for more!
P.S I kind of like the voiceover because it makes it seem more like an Episode but if it's easier for you to write in first person, I don't mind!

AAH! elliot finally got her mexican apple theif...
i love these strories SO MUCH!