I love you!
Your Hiashi rocks!
I love it when author are DARING and WONDERFUL, because fun *always* happens.

That was so funny! I especially like the part where all the jounins are handing the money to Kurenai. I hope you write more of these. ^-^

Very funny.

you know, id have the same reaction. id also be letting out even more killing intent at the end of that fight, before it turned out that Hinata had won. awesome reflection of what i believe would have happened.

if i'm not mistaken hinata occurs in the first episode (i think she's cheering naruto on when he has to do henge)

but i just love this story!

The Hiashi fist pump at the end made the fic for me.

nice

plzs continue i love hinata beating the crap outa sasuke

Would have been amusing to see more, but it could be in danger of falling flat if continued. Well done!

I found this hilariously cute. It also helps that I'm a self-admitted Hinata-fanboy too and to see her wipe teh floor with Sasuke is something I will always love to see.

I haven't read that early in the manga, but I know in the anime Hinata, Ino, Shikamaru and Chouji all have a line or two before Teams 7, 8 and 10 go their seperate ways.

Amazingly well done! Have you ever considered adding a couple more chapters?

Not sure how I missed this one. Nice little idea you have here.

Though Hinata was crated before Sasuke or Sakura, as far as I know Sakura was made last of all the kids, its why she was so... lacking, I guess at the start though the writer liked her so she got better.

But Hinata was one of the first ones he made besides Naruto himself, she just wasn't saposed to be a Ninja.

Guess he could have still been going with that idea for her way back then.

Though Sasuke is freeking lucky she didn't kill him! The Hyuuga have that odd style where NOT killing you is the hight of their power, the easyest move for them to land would blow up your heart or lungs or liver after all.

Man! I just love that servant! "She beat the pants off him in ten seconds, sir!" That must be the best line I've read all day. I love how he remembered to add "sir" to the end of the phrase. Good for him and good for Hinata.

Lol! That was brilliant! It's always the quiet ones you don't want to piss off.

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