Omg I absolutley LOVE this!
Nice to find another fellow HijiOki fan! This couple needs more love!


Yachiru-san

It doesnt matter how many times I read this, it always makes me giggle. **.

:D

I am not a fan of OkiHiji as a couple, but this one is funny! Dialogue-wise you've managed to replicate Gintama's sense of humor, and that is not an easy thing to do! Good job on that.

Love it

Im laughing so hard I cant see xDD

LOL!^^ DAMN Okita! And kondo can be quite the 'intelligent' person when he wants to be!

LOL! Nice. My favorite part was: "It's like a rug-burn. Except its not from a rug. It's from a **. Making it **-burn. From the **." xD!

Oh my... **-BURN! Ouch... I'm laughing I'm laughing!

Yeahie~ Love this!

xD I enjoyed this. It was funny although the image of the genital rash makes me shudder. HAHAHA please write more!!

Another zinger! LOL. YES! Hijikata and Okita together! Hijikata on bottom? HMM...gives me ideas. Mwahahaha.
*runs off to write perverted Okita/Hijikata fic*
Great job as usual. I was expecting them to bring in Yamazaki as the reluctant third party for their threesome (that would have been hilarious and hot) but it's all good anyway!

lol...** burn xDD

=D Ending is the best...But it's all great. XD **-burn!!