As with many of your fics that I've read, some of your turns of phrase are excellent. The last line is perhaps a little jarring, however, and in some places the structure could use some tightening. One of my favorite lines- "Your mother tells you to follow your heart, but Taiga makes sure you follow your blood"- is a little vague because of the paragraph it's placed in. It's wonderful, though, because the fic is at its creepiest when you highlight contrast. "Your father might have been a fantastic man, but he was an even more fantastic human" is similarly beautiful.

All in all, a lovely fic.

interesting story, could do one showing Maya being jealous of otoya worry of Yuri?

that never happen in Kiva! though it still pretty good.