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Actually, not bad Ovo, though a little confusing.

Not many people even know about Final Fantasy 3j, and I'm pleasantly surprised you wrote a short story about one of the best Final Fantasies never released in the US. The first person perspective on it is nice, and nicer still that it come from a female perspective. I'm a little bit confused on what she's talking about; it seems like she's referring to the start of their adventure, but who the heck is "Rushialka"? Lukyan is an obvious reference to Luhkan in FFI, though ever FF story has their own Luhkan.

Overall, decent for a short descriptive piece, though it'd be nice to see it continued. Not much chance of that though.

Smurf

Nicely done! It's definitely *not* an overdone subject, and you did a nice job of fleshing out a game that, um, didn't have much flesh originally.