Wow, that was the best story I've read in a long time. Cloud and Aerith's presents to one another was really stunning. I really liked how the story ended. And, most of all, I'm glad Cloud and Aerith finally got together!

Oh my gosh! Seph is Aerith's half-brother!? Wow, I never would of guessed they were related. That was a rather surprising twist. I hope Aerith doesn't take the new-found news too hard. I feel really sorry for her and Seph.

Poor Cloud and Aerith. Well, Cloud, what're you waiting for!? Go and get your woman! Anyway, once again this was another marvelous chapter. I hope thing work out in the end.

Cool story.

I really don't read to many modernization fics but i'm glad i gave this one a look over.

PS, liking your Dissidia fic.

This story keeps on getting better and better with each passing chapter. It's so vivid and so wonderfully thought up. Also, I'm really happy that things are starting to turn around for Aerith. Also, I love how Cloud commented her at the end of the chapter. It was beautifully sweet.

Yuffie Rocks! And, she's right though. Aerith does deserve a little treatment after everything she's been through. I completely amazed at your writing style. It is really fantastic.

Aerith's past had to be one of the most heart-breaking tragedy I've read in a long time. Cloud really wants to help her with all his power. That made me extremely happy!

Aww, poor Aerith. I felt so sorry for her at the beginning of the chapter. But, oh my gosh, I'm glad that Cloud found and saved her. This is the start of a beautiful romance. Anyway, this was a wonderful introduction. I can't wait to read more.

Daw, cute cute cute story :D
I definitely want to make note that I liked Sephiroth's character in this. I guess this was his "pre-insanity" days. :D

OMG, this story is BEAUTIFUL~ Nice job making her and Seph siblings *giggles* don't see that too often!! I hope there'll be a sequel or something. X3

I love this pair! So cute. ^^

OH! Cute :D OMG I was LOL-ing so hard by Sephiroth's proper grammar XD

"Acceptable" LMAO.

Beautiful story <3 :3

chapter 5: “As of nine PM tonight, it will have been six years, four months and twenty-three days,” Sephiroth listed. all i have to say to that is cloud got MAJORLY PWND xD. but the ending was very cute :3 keep up on the good work :D

Ah, that was just sweet all around. Even Cid with his gruff manner and Sephiroth's touch of frost couldn't dampen the general warm fuzzies. I really liked that Sephiroth was fairly accepting of his new sister, despite the tangle their parents had made and his own distant demeanor. It's all very promising and perfect for a Christmas fic.

This is a really good fanfiction! It sorta reminds me of Full House, the korean drama(: keep it up; you're doing a fantasmic job.