Loved it...great story...made me believe Grissom could straighten himself out.

Swet. Very nice story.

Thanks for a great "what if?"...and for the wonderful way Grissom made his case! Good read!

Aw...I love it!

"I'm ready," he told her. "I resigned as supervisor. I have no job. I have no house. I don't know where the movers are with my furniture. But as Shakespeare once said, 'the course of true love never did run smooth.'

This is my favorite line. I can see him stammering with this live. Shuffling from foot to foot.

Great work!

That was very nice and a satisfying ending. I just used that Shakespeare quote regarding them myself! lol. Thanks for writing.

Beth

This is a great story great job

That was good

That's great. I'm ready to cry from happiness and fluff. Thanks.
~H