Did Victoria hurt Brooke? Will Lucas break off the engagment(hope so)? Will Lucas run after Brooke? Will Brooke get pregnant? Will Lucas and Brooke get back together?

NiCe!

oh this is devastatingly good. the characters are so believable, and i let out a little gasp at the end, because i couldn't quite believe the drama. wonderful oneshot, really :)

I strangly love it when stories are written in the "you" form. Makes the emotional impact that much bigger. This was a beautiful smutty emo oneshot and it was absolutely AWESOME

Wow that was beautiful.

this story was awesome! i wish there was more! even if it was only like a 3 chapter story. it was great! and i love that u put it in the beginning of season 6 which btw i am no longer watching because i just cant take the crap anymore. its ridiculous! but this was soo well written like all of ur stuff is! loved how brooke said maybe she was never good. i think maybe she should be bad...peyton was bad and she ended up with the guy. it sucks. brucas was hot and steamy and u could really tell they loved eaxh other which is what i love the most! yay! God Bless! ~alithompson

wow!! this was so good!

That was absolutly amazing. I love the way you write, it's beautiful.

OMG!! THAT ONE-SHOT WAS SO, SO GREAT! SO RAW WITH EMOTION, SO REAL! I LOVED IT!

Wow, Typokween. Happy Thanksgiving.
I miss BL.

wow, that was really powerful. I enjoyed the intensity in their coupling and how you described brooke's emotions. I loved the honesty in it, b/c other people would expect them to get back together, but i like that you know it wouldn't work out. also i think its quite col that brooke leaves lucas in her own bed. It's symbolic of their relationship. You're a wonderful writer and i loved the second person narrative, i think it fit well with the story ;)

Yana

Elena,
This oneshot just about broke my heart. It was so fantastically written and angsty, God I loved the angst. I'm just speechless, fantastic job my dear, absolutely amazing!

*hugs*
Ella

Oh my god. This was so amazing. It was hot and angsty and wonderful - I loved the idea of Brooke thinking that she's a bad person, because ultimately it is so far from the truth, but she would totally be one to beat herself up over sleeping with Lucas while he's with Peyton. I think the way you ended this was great, but it demands a sequel, of what happens after she confronts Victoria. Does she come back to Tree Hill? Does Lucas go get her? Does she kill herself? Does Peyton find out? There are so many possibilities. Please write a sequel.

What can i say hun, other than that you nail it every time. You're wonderful, the oneshot is awesome, you keep BL realistic which is a damn mission impossible after all the crap that Mark has pulled... and as always you make me feel every single sentence of your writing, straight down to the bone.

i feel this oneshot the same way i feel that BR scene when Brooke is on the floor in VT. You know what i mean. When Brooke's hurting - i'm hurting. When she's horny - I'm horny. And when she realizes that she isn't as 'good' and 'morally correct' as she might have thought, then i'm right there with her nodding and not giving a crap LOL.

I just because i'm disturbed like that, i hope that Lucas realizes just hours later that Brooke is the one he wants, and when he goes to find her, she's gone. It would totally serve him right.

anyways...

Love you.

Awesome job.

Amazing writing.

and now i'm gonna send you the 'Haley looking at BL through the window'-scene that i promised you. :D

Muwah!

That was SO good! I loved it! Seriously; it was amazing! =)