Great chapters! I especially liked the story with Petrie's uncle Pterano in it! He is one of my favorite characters. I hope you will include him in another story since he is allowed to return to the great valley once every 50 days.

Very Good!

Another great chapter, I wonder how Redclaw will be defeated this time.

Update soon and thanks!

Dang what a cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next!

You know, maybe it's better that you didn't put any songs in there because it would ruin the mood of your story. Besides, without the musics, this whole series is better than the crap they put in the TV series because the TV series left a lot of plotholes.

Sounds like Rita had a very tough time with leaf-eaters, can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Another good chapter!

Glad to see Rory and Myra and the gang like each other, I just hope nothing bad happens to Chomper or Rita.

Nice start, wonder how those 3 will react when they see Chomper's friends.

Great chapter!

I wonder if my OCs will convince Chomper to try meat again?

Wow. That was some story. Great to see Cera make use of her "big voice" again. And a very humorous twist to have Pterano break his wing for real. Glad to see that Sierra and Rinkus got away, too (villainous as they are).
However, I wouldn't think that Chomper would be the *only* means of alerting the Great Valley to attacks by sharpteeth. He may speak their language, but unless he could hear them talking all the way from the Mysterious Beyond, I can't imagine he'd be as useful an early warning system as Great Valley flyers who could see approaching sharpteeth from far away.

Great conclusion!

I can't wait to see how the next story goes...

Wow, nice wrap-up on this story. It was very funny indeed the way Chomper got that tree star juice off Pterano's wings. Course now I'm looking forward to the next story after that cliffhanger, keep up the great work. :)

Awesome chapter! Some great lines ("I'd bet my horns he did!"), a fantastic (aerial!) battle scene, and a first-hand lesson on why it's a bad idea to insult a threehorn. (Too bad Red Claw had to show up before we got to see Cera turn the tables on Screech. Oh well...) We still don't know what Pterano's deal with Red Claw was, though. Also, I hope Sierra and Rinkus don't die. I like them too much as villains to see them get killed off. Anyway, I can't wait for more. Keep it coming!

Excellent chapter & well worth the wait, can't believe screech called cera that, that's like asking to get a beating right there XD. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great chapter! LOL, Screech called Cera fat, I thought she was going to clobber him!

Maybe she will next chapter, though.