That was perfect and adorable and better characterized than the series.

Can I read it again!?

I think you captured all of the characters quite well. Very amusing, and nice job.

"Oh no. A nuclear explosion." XD Awesome story!

Good job.

Hehehehe...you captured Mello perfectly. Again, nicely done--all of the stuff of yours that I've read has entertained me very much, and this is no exception. Good work!

This is awesome. You are awesome. Your awesomeness causes my soul to explode and be brung back to life because of how awesome this is.

PERFECT FLAWLESS AMAZING FANTASTIC characterization, advanced and amazing writing style, lovely length and division of each scene.

I love this. A lot.

Oh God, I thought I would die when I read the line "Oh no. A nuclear explosion." I can just picture him saying something like that XD Very cute, in character, and a fun little snapshot of life at Wammy's.

This was a great story! You really have the personalities of the characters down. Great story idea, loved Near and Mello.

"ignoring the fact that his clogged nose made it taste no better than paper."

Would just like to comment that food, to me, has no different taste whatsoever whether I have a stuffy nose or not. -shrug- maybe to some people it does.

Funny and adorable at the same time! No more chocolate for Mero-chan.

LMAO
that's great! i was already laughing but when i read the part where Near said "Oh no. A nuclear explosion" it made me laugh even harder XD
this is GREAT!

That last part made me laugh very hard for some reason.