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Reviews for: Jack Needs To Go Back
Boo2ubam
2009-04-28 . chapter 1
I don't think it would've been good to start off season 5, no offence, but Kate wouldn't just give up and she didn't, it took her a while to realise that Aaron isn't hers to keep.
ICanSeeUrButtCrack
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
dude, r u tryin' to make a script to give jj abrams?
bcos i think he'll consider it.
the part with the 'lost' poppin' out is a lil' corny though...
jerseygirlkjm
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
WOW that is a really good first scene! they should make that the real first scene when the show comes on!
loved!
ParisAmy
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
That was good!
I liked the ending ;)
Bwill
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
That was a good one shot.
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