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nhienphan2808
2009-12-05 . chapter 5
You know what i love about this story ? It's different from most time-travel fanfics ive read so far. I'm so impressed ! Yeah, you can not ever change the past whenever and anyway you want without paying some huge price ! love Minato's fatherhood here. Keep up the great work and words !! Looking forward to seeing new chapters of "Hyakumensou" from you too !
MYsweetAngel
2009-11-11 . chapter 5
wow!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE
this fic!11
the plot is great!
and I love Naruaki!
:)
Akira Stridder
2009-11-08 . chapter 5
woow that was awesome! heh but its a risky plan..
MjSpidey
2009-11-07 . chapter 5
Good one.
maconi
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
budy iv read your story and have been waiting impatiently for a couple months...u cant just write a good story and leave us hanging like this..its criminal
TheFinalCountdown
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
Wow, this is great! It's been a while since I last came across a good timetravel fic. It's interesting to see a jaded version of Naruto, and just as so watching him interact with Minato. I'll be looking forward to seeing 'Naruaki' interact with Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi as things progress as well. Keep it up!
Dezzal
2009-10-24 . chapter 5
dude this story is awesome.i cant wait to find out whats next.hope you update soon
mf
2009-10-22 . chapter 5
more please
Itachi's aprentice
2009-10-19 . chapter 5
Great work, can't wait for the next chapter.
Itachi's aprentice
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
Great work. If I remember correctly Orochimaru defection happen a after the Kyuubi attack a few month later.(Like I said I don't remember.)

But like you stated in you first A/N you can't change that with out destroying your plot.

Great work.
Itachi's aprentice
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
Great work.

I have decided that I let the story take its course and see what pairings are the most suitable

I agree completely:)
Itachi's aprentice
2009-10-19 . chapter 2
Great work. (a) Naruaki/Kurenai I feel this pairing would be good considering Naruaki cool analytical mind, just like she has.
Itachi's aprentice
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Great work. I definitely didn't expect something like this. Great work.
Phantom 4 Life
2009-10-19 . chapter 5
O great lord Agni! Please grant us an update soon or I may be forced to desperate measures!

-P4L
xxfreefallangelxx
2009-10-16 . chapter 5
I LOVE THIS STORY! this story is so different then any other time travel stories that I read. its so awesome and well written, it has a well written plot and it has purpose. i love the fact that you didn't make naruto super powerful and have everyone just follow him without thinking things through just because he has knowledge of the future. and i love how you're subtly changing things but still keeping them as close to the cannon as possible. not alot of people can get away with that. i just have so much to say and i don't even know how to express how awesome this story is. just great job and i hope you update soon!
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