This was good, I really liked it. sad, and sweet, just like Ben ;)

Poor troubled Ben, I really felt for him. Very movingly done.

Ummm...okay. What's the deal with chapter 2?

This is still great, but isn't it the same thing

I love this story. It's so great. I cried when I read it. I think that this is about the best one shot I have read so far. Please don't stop writing fanfiction any time soon. _

Another great peice! Very good; very sad. I particularly liked this line: "We're not in Manticore anymore. We can't keep living by their rules. We don't have to." Ben: "I'm not; I'm living by mine." Nice work. Keep 'em coming!

I liked it, but you have to read it a couple of times to try and figure out who is saying what. But, like I said I still liked it alot.