Not bad, but you don't need to underline all the words, but I personally think all stories should strive to be at least 1000 words long

It gave a well thought out grisly image of the fight. And war is hell, but what can you do? Nice job you may want to watch your grammer a little more.

If you would add some information about the two nations, the war, the fleets, the technological advances, etc. People would actually review