I wish I never read that. horible ending

good story!

I like your works, good story. looking forward to more

Ria and Jerrath didn't deserve this... Fate can be mercilessly cruel at times.
Anyway, it was a good read, albeit a pretty sad one.

Megatyrant out.

Definitely not a Hollywood ending, but I'm glade it wasn't; that would have been a real disappointment to end your career (at least for now) like that. I really think that that was the perfect ending, although I wish that Ria could have lived...
I hope that you come back to write more someday, but if you are finished, I'm gald that I could come along for the ride.

Bravo, Bravo...
i guess you can tell that i've predy well quit too?
Yeah my life is a busy one... yours must be too with college etc. So this is the end of the almighty TMHB77?

p.s: Remember me? i think u do...

That was so sad. I'm actually tearing up. Nice one pal. Pity that you haven't any more stories planned.

That was a very well written story, shame it had a sad ending - as far as I could tell, also a shame you are not writting any more works, I would love to read them.

...Wow. GREAT story! You've created a futuristic metropolis where Spyro and Cynder are literally a hazy memory, yet they are there for some action alongside your fan characters. Almost the equivalent of my 'Blade' story. And nice tragic ending if I do say so myself. Well done! Looking forward to stories from you in the future, buddy. Ciao!

~Neo Rabbit - Hope never dies, it stays alive.

A sad ending to a sad tale, but it fits. At least they'll be safe from persecution now...

Hey sorry I haven't reviewed in like... forever... But I have been keeping up with this story and it was a great one! The ending was pretty tragic.. I was really hoping that they would pull through... But hey, that's the way the cookie crumbles (ok... That was lame...)

Can't wIt for your next story... Whenever u make it.

Anxiously waiting,
NoOne

Ok. I think that cleared up what was happening with the 2 Rias.

No Hollywood ending is clear, but that makes it real doesn't it.

Absolutly nothing wrong that I could see.

Loved it,
cornys

Nice use of cliffhanger. Really looking forward to the next part.

Huh, a siren...didn't really see that coming. And I hope it isn't just a hollywod ending, I've come to expect a lot more from you than that lol.
Also, sorry it took me so long to get back, but my life's getting crazy again.

OMG! Only 2 chaps left? And I've noticed that you spelt "exorcise" wrong. Just thought I'd give you the heads-up. Can't wait for the next chapter.