Silly me, not to check here for your stories. Nicely done! It read like a chapter in one of the books - but if that were the case, then it'd be J.K.'s, not yours, and that'd be no good. She's got *enough*! Well done.

I love the story but just a reminer that you cannot Apparate or Disapparate inside the Hogwarts grounds. Othe than that, keep up the good work!:)

A magnificent story!

aaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwww poor Neville

oh my gosh, this is SO good!

ooh, this is getting really good! well, off to read chapter 5! *skips merrily off*

i really enjoyed this story. but i have to split (not literally) b/c the computer screen is giving me a head ache.