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Ravenpan
2004-02-16
ch 3,
abuseWow, that was really cool. I can't think of anything else to say, but that was REALLY cool.
Meesh (too lazy to sign in,...
2001-12-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseawwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! thanks for not killing chi-chi!! how so cute! "you know what rubbing my hair does to me.. don't yoU?"
that's just so cute!
great ending!! ^_^
Senaca
2001-12-02
ch 3, anon.
abuseThat was a good story. Please continue the good story writing.
megami juhachigou
2001-11-27
ch 3,
abusegood story! very emotional. tho, you're japanese was screwed up, but that happens to a lot of people. don't feel you need to write in jap to make things sound more impressive. mj ^_~
Polka Dot
2001-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseAwww, really awwww. so sweet.
may
2001-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abuseA wonderful story and quite emotional to say the least!
Neo Kei
2001-11-27
ch 3,
abuseAw...that was very sweet. I'm glad to hear that ChiChi will be okay.
Kajidragon
2001-11-27
ch 3,
abuseAww good fic. I agree its better to tell kids the truth than keep them in the dark. I am so glad you didn't have Chichi die at the end. ^.^ Take care and keep writing!
Babyshiro
2001-11-27
ch 3, anon.
abusesweet ending ^^ me like heh
Lady Nightshade
2001-11-27
ch 3,
abusesmooth
Jami-chan
2001-11-27
ch 3,
abuseaaaaaawww what a kawaii story! poor goten-chan... being left out! ::sniffle:: so many things happen like this story in real life... but a kawaii story none the less!
OmegaBlast
2001-11-26
ch 2, anon.
abuseVery profound fic, you shoudl finish it soon.
Meesh
2001-11-26
ch 2,
abuseawwwwww it's so good! *tear* i can't wait for the third part...
*chains herself to the story & won't unlock herself until the third part is up*
lady_videl
2001-11-26
ch 2, anon.
abuseNormally I hate fics having to do with Chichi, but this is very touching and really well thought out. You did a wonderful job, and I can't wait to read that last chapter. Did I say it was touching? :p
Babyshiro
2001-11-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseI hope you know my sister is in tears...^^ too bad tearjerkers such as this one never have any type of affect on me! But this was indeed a great fic please continue!
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