Wow, that was really cool. I can't think of anything else to say, but that was REALLY cool.

awwwwwwwwww! thanks for not killing chi-chi! how so cute! "you know what rubbing my hair does to me.. don't yoU?"

that's just so cute!

great ending! _

That was a good story. Please continue the good story writing.

good story! very emotional. tho, you're japanese was screwed up, but that happens to a lot of people. don't feel you need to write in jap to make things sound more impressive. mj _

Awww, really awwww. so sweet.

A wonderful story and quite emotional to say the least!

Aw...that was very sweet. I'm glad to hear that ChiChi will be okay.

Aww good fic. I agree its better to tell kids the truth than keep them in the dark. I am so glad you didn't have Chichi die at the end. . Take care and keep writing!

sweet ending me like heh

smooth

aaaaaawww what a kawaii story! poor goten-chan... being left out! ::sniffle:: so many things happen like this story in real life... but a kawaii story none the less!

Very profound fic, you shoudl finish it soon.

awwwwww it's so good! *tear* i can't wait for the third part...

*chains herself to the story & won't unlock herself until the third part is up*

Normally I hate fics having to do with Chichi, but this is very touching and really well thought out. You did a wonderful job, and I can't wait to read that last chapter. Did I say it was touching? :p

I hope you know my sister is in tears... too bad tearjerkers such as this one never have any type of affect on me! But this was indeed a great fic please continue!