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| Ravenpan 2004-02-16 ch 3,  | abuseWow, that was really cool. I can't think of anything else to say, but that was REALLY cool. |
| Meesh (too lazy to sign in,... 2001-12-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseawwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!! thanks for not killing chi-chi!! how so cute! "you know what rubbing my hair does to me.. don't yoU?" that's just so cute! great ending!! ^_^ |
| Senaca 2001-12-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseThat was a good story. Please continue the good story writing. |
| megami juhachigou 2001-11-27 ch 3, | abusegood story! very emotional. tho, you're japanese was screwed up, but that happens to a lot of people. don't feel you need to write in jap to make things sound more impressive. mj ^_~ |
| Polka Dot 2001-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwww, really awwww. so sweet. |
| may 2001-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseA wonderful story and quite emotional to say the least! |
| Neo Kei 2001-11-27 ch 3, | abuseAw...that was very sweet. I'm glad to hear that ChiChi will be okay. |
| Kajidragon 2001-11-27 ch 3, | abuseAww good fic. I agree its better to tell kids the truth than keep them in the dark. I am so glad you didn't have Chichi die at the end. ^.^ Take care and keep writing! |
| Babyshiro 2001-11-27 ch 3, anon. | abusesweet ending ^^ me like heh |
| Lady Nightshade 2001-11-27 ch 3, | abusesmooth |
| Jami-chan 2001-11-27 ch 3, | abuseaaaaaawww what a kawaii story! poor goten-chan... being left out! ::sniffle:: so many things happen like this story in real life... but a kawaii story none the less! |
| OmegaBlast 2001-11-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery profound fic, you shoudl finish it soon. |
| Meesh 2001-11-26 ch 2, | abuseawwwwww it's so good! *tear* i can't wait for the third part... *chains herself to the story & won't unlock herself until the third part is up* |
| lady_videl 2001-11-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseNormally I hate fics having to do with Chichi, but this is very touching and really well thought out. You did a wonderful job, and I can't wait to read that last chapter. Did I say it was touching? :p |
| Babyshiro 2001-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope you know my sister is in tears...^^ too bad tearjerkers such as this one never have any type of affect on me! But this was indeed a great fic please continue! |