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Ravenpan 2/16/04 . chapter 3
Wow, that was really cool. I can't think of anything else to say, but that was REALLY cool.
Meesh too lazy to sign in lol 12/6/01 . chapter 3
awwwwwwwwww! thanks for not killing chi-chi! how so cute! "you know what rubbing my hair does to me.. don't yoU?"

that's just so cute!

great ending! _
Senaca 12/2/01 . chapter 3
That was a good story. Please continue the good story writing.
megami juhachigou 11/27/01 . chapter 3
good story! very emotional. tho, you're japanese was screwed up, but that happens to a lot of people. don't feel you need to write in jap to make things sound more impressive. mj _
Polka Dot 11/27/01 . chapter 3
Awww, really awwww. so sweet.
may 11/27/01 . chapter 3
A wonderful story and quite emotional to say the least!
Neo Kei 11/27/01 . chapter 3
Aw...that was very sweet. I'm glad to hear that ChiChi will be okay.
Kajidragon 11/27/01 . chapter 3
Aww good fic. I agree its better to tell kids the truth than keep them in the dark. I am so glad you didn't have Chichi die at the end. . Take care and keep writing!
Babyshiro 11/27/01 . chapter 3
sweet ending me like heh
Lady Nightshade 11/27/01 . chapter 3
smooth
Jami-chan 11/27/01 . chapter 3
aaaaaawww what a kawaii story! poor goten-chan... being left out! ::sniffle:: so many things happen like this story in real life... but a kawaii story none the less!
OmegaBlast 11/26/01 . chapter 2
Very profound fic, you shoudl finish it soon.
Meesh 11/26/01 . chapter 2
awwwwww it's so good! *tear* i can't wait for the third part...

*chains herself to the story & won't unlock herself until the third part is up*
ladyvidel 11/26/01 . chapter 2
Normally I hate fics having to do with Chichi, but this is very touching and really well thought out. You did a wonderful job, and I can't wait to read that last chapter. Did I say it was touching? :p
Babyshiro 11/24/01 . chapter 1
I hope you know my sister is in tears... too bad tearjerkers such as this one never have any type of affect on me! But this was indeed a great fic please continue!
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