 IZZYgurl94 2009-06-04 . chapter 1hey i tried 2 send u my e-mail but u hav PMing disabled and i dont wanna post my e-mail publicly so if u could enable PMing 4 just long enough 2 let me send it 2 u that would b awsome!
o p.s. this story is great 2! lol |
 Choice 2009-05-20 . chapter 1This was love. (: |
 Fandom Jumper 2009-01-30 . chapter 1Now, I'm not usually a JudeXMax shipper...
but this story was so darn cute, I just had to compliment it. I love Max and Jude, and the thought of Max being insanely ticklish like me is an extremely adorable image.
Anyway...I added this story to my favorites. I'm adding you to my fave authors, too.
This was so sweet! |
 Dawnie-7 2008-12-10 . chapter 1All, that made me feel all giddy inside. Like the warm fuzzies! Perfect :D |
 I Suspect Nargles 2008-12-06 . chapter 1That...just made my day.
Oh my. That was just downright magical.
Very, very cute.
The laying of their hands on Max's chest, that was practically perfect. Like Mary Poppins, only better.
Them wrestling on the ground was so CUTE! In every single way.
Ah, I'm not good at like, talking and forming words, so I'll spare you.
Just...favorites :D Wonderful. |
 blackbirdxsinging 2008-11-29 . chapter 1promise me you'll never leave fanfiction. NEVER LEAVE ME!
I cant live without these stories! :D
thankyouthankyouthankyou for writing this!
There wasnt as much description in this, but it was all in the action and the picture that the reader percieved, which were all very well done, I think.
Wonderful =] |
 Eriala 2008-11-29 . chapter 1I loved this, I really did. It was cute, and so realistic too... I'm trying to think of some great feedback, but all I can think is "aw"... nice work. |
 daisy duke of earl 2008-11-28 . chapter 1Aw, I love this! It's so adorable, and yet, it has depth to it (like the part where he was touching his chest. I dunno, it just seemed like a really raw, emotional thing to do. I have no idea if I'm just feeling extra girly today, haha, but I loved that part.) It was very in character, which is awesome. You did a really great job with this, and you figured out how to make pillow-fights not cliche, haha. I'm going to go check out if you have any more fabulous stories right now. :) |
 TakeMeOrLeaveMe2010 2008-11-28 . chapter 1There is only one phrase that describes this story:
*SQUE!*
Oh. My. GOD. That. was. SO. FLIPPING. ADORABLE. I. can't. stand. it.
I'm going to try to pick out my favorites in the story, but seriously, everything was amazing.
- Jude noticing Max being a ball of energy during the day and conking out later (in the laundry basket? xD). I don't know, that fact's always been there, but no one's mentioned it.
- This line: "though he was loath to admit it, his best mate was too damn cute when he was asleep". I pictured Max and Judey snuggling up together, wrapping a warm comforter around them, and my heart melted like a popsicle.
- "With a roll of his eyes, he decided to try a different tactic. Reaching over, being as careful as he could, he brushed his fingers across the other boy’s stomach." DAMN, that gave ME shivers. =D
- “That, my friend, is a lie and you know it. I am very, uh…respectful and…” Max scowled, searching for the word. “…considerate when it comes to your finger paintings and stick figures. I even hang them up on the refrigerator when you’re all done.” LMAO. That was definitely the best line.
- “Must…reach…pillow..!” Max gasped dramatically, struggling in vain to grab said object, which rested just inches out of his grasp." Considering I do this all the time, it made me smile lots. =D
...Okay, I've got to stop before I copy and paste the whole story. Everything was just so darn cute and sweet and funny and...*sigh*
Thank you for writing this. I've been awaiting this fic for a long time, and was soo happy when I saw you wrote it.
Much love
~KT |
 nleslie 2008-11-28 . chapter 1Ahh, I knew I would love this, and I did! My favorite part was totally:
“Jesus, my heart’s beating so fast—feel.” Reaching blindly, the blond took his hand and laid both of their palms against his chest.
That was very... visual... for me. It played in my head like a movie, it was clearly written and the whole thing was very well done. I've been missing fics like this. I might just have to happy dance, oh yes. ;) Wonderful as always, ESY! |
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