it was so cute! I loved it a lot. I liked the last one most, but the one where Roxas was late for Axel and Larx's wedding was pretty heartbreaking too. Anyway, waiting for more of those?
Jareth

i loved it! <3 very cute ^_^.

Annd another favorite. First word prompt I ever read, and I gotta say, it inspired me to write one myself (don't think I will though). So, yeah, gotta be good there.
1) Some quotation mistakes, little boring, but didn't have enough space to lead up to anything anyway, so that can't be helped.
2) I liked the word "permeate," but I don't really know what else to say here.
3) I like the writing style here, which is odd, 'cause that type normally bugs me. But here, it fits just so good. Any particular reason behind the numbers 21 and 4, or did it just work out that way? Hmm... for some reason, I have a feeling that Axel's feeling is wrong this time. Noll weall.
4) Wow, I liked how you described Roxas as feeling deaf without the blaring music. It's like, an oxymoron. Almost. Something, whatever, it was cool. And interesting how you didn't think of a scrap of cloth from "rag."
5) Somehow, the content-length ratio surprises me. I like the last paragraph best, especially the part with the "smirking green."
6) Mm, my third favorite prompt here. I totally do not see Larxel happening, but I love Roxas's reaction over it. So... desperate. It's sad, and I think you portrayed it well.
7) Ah... no real comment, I guess. Although, I'm with Axel, that would inhale profusely, like, so bad.
8) I'm thinking a little /too/ emo here, but granted, it's not without good reason. Hm, I wanna know why Roxas was leaving.
9) Yah, this one's funny. And I could /so/ just imagine the setting. I'd like to see Axel bleed one day.
10) Ah... for some reason, I've never really seen Axel as a smoker. Fire, sure, but smoke? Not so much. "Belatedly," good word. What's Axel's last name, then, or did you not think one up? Axel was so lying about the fluid. I thought it was moderately funny how he gave Roxas smokes, even though he'd said he didn't use 'em.
11) Second favorite. Geez, I wanna know what Roxas did. And I like how you explained Roxas's hand positions when he saw the car coming. I bet they both died, but only one did so instantly, and whoever was in the other car got off with minimal injuries.
12) My very favorite prompt. I like how you styled the beginning without quotes, even though Axel was saying that stuff. I like the spike thing, with the pillow and the hair, because it's like... yeah. I like the thoughts going on in Roxas's head as an initial reaction. I liked the ending too, but I think the last sentence would be better off left out.
13) Ah, lexicon, that's Zexion's weapon, right? And I like Axel explanation, it was cute (thought it would be a kiss, liked it this way more). If you'd ask me though, Zexion's was the easiest to understand.

Absolutely wonderful. Thirteen words, thirteen lives. My favorite was twelve and thirteen^^They were cute but there others were good. Have a fantabulous day/!

This was so cute!! It reminded me of a list of 100 themes I used for my own writing. I can give the list, if you want.

"Foam" made me think of my AxelxRiku story, mainly because Axel had a vanilla milkshake from McDonald's in it. xD "Equal" was just so sweet! I absolutely loved how Roxas intrrupted Axel's narration. Awesome.

You wrote an excellent balance of triumph and tragedy. I'm so favoriting this.

i LOVED 12. it was really good. and 13. those two were my fav cause they were so subtly sweet. at least the last one was. 12 was more obvious. haha

the last one was really good.
nice job!
^^

I really loved this but I think that my favorite one was the wedding one..or um, oh Traffic.
Yeah, it was sad.

Anyways, all the best to you.

yes, the last one was -god-! And the cigarette pack one was LOVE! and number six too. Those were my favorites, but they were all so filled with akuroku sunshiney goodness XD

-ahem-

Blah blah blah AkuRoku blah good story blah word prompts yay blah blah blah yay!

... Do more of these. They're good and I like word prompts.

And Woodforks.

Psh, so what if you accidentally submitted it as French. Everyone will live. I'm sure it's not the first time it's happened.

This was cute, yeah. And I think I pretty much agree... Affection and Equal were the best! I also liked Lobby. And Crisis. Traffic is sad... but still good. And Surface was one of my favorites. So I pretty much liked everything. Like always.

Happy Thanksgiving!

-Kiki

I've got to say, I really liked Affection and Equal the most. They were just so...I can't find a word to fit...But it's really good.

now please would you kindly get the fck out of the French category with that shtty English story of yours, you dumbass?

Eer..yeah, there is obsviously a problem here XD
You posted your fanfic on the french section...you should remove it quickly^^

(mon anglais, c'est de la merde XD)

le schtroumpf de la mort: calme toi un peu, ce n'est qu'une erreur !

on s'en branle, pauvre tache. va mettre tes conneries là où c'est leur place : la section anglophone ou la poubelle.