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Reviews for: Neglect
Crimson Fade
2009-05-03 . chapter 1
It was short, but I loved the emphasis you put on certain words and how devilish yet innocent the whole thing was. Very nice.
Dark Hearted Shinobi
2008-12-09 . chapter 1
That was interesting. I like the way you set it up too. Very good.
Ivonovna
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
Very nice. Poor Gaara though! STOOPID PEOPLE! You couldn't ever be good enough for Gaara...Lol, Riss, if he was in flesh and blood, (HE IS REAL! I KNOW IT!) You'd supply him with enough hugs for the ones he missed and the rest of his life :D I like how you accentuated the things that hit him the hardest in bold :)
SkywardShadow
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
This was pretty dang awesome
Really, really Gaara-ish
Short, yet gets the point across really well
Perfect placement of the bold words, italics and such
Great work
again
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