Oh my...uber hottness! Whoa...

*faves*

I love it! :D
Great job!

this is honestly the most well-written fanfiction story i've ever read. there's nothing i hate more than when newbs publish something with a ton of spelling and gramatical errors. and you captured their personlities PERFECTLY. :]] keep this goin', hun!!

Hell yes continue!
The way you describe the intensity is amazing!
Also loved the scene were the guy comes into the bathroom.

You better continue this!! I like the pairing and the plot. Update soon!

hihi. Keep going with this story, its very different, i think its cool. so yeah, keep it going, and I will bake you a cookie.

Woah . . . woah, woah, fucking WOAH. Just . . . WOAH!! Like, woah.

Alright, my brain has been in the gutter all day, so let's see if we can get anything constructive from this.

Dally and Two-Bit were right on, and the tension between them was so . . . intense, it was honestly frightening. I really loved it when the guy walked in and Dally threatened him with the blade. That was rich.

All in all, it was just mind blowing.