Don't u dare leave. If so, i will never leave ur mail-box alone. It's a very good series. You r good at writing it. Do NOT leave this alone for 2 years. I don't think i could handle it. I LOVE this story *gets pathetic look* don't abandon it pwease?

Bravo! *claps* Bye-bye James! *evil laughter*

What do you mean stop writing for a year or two? That's not fair! I think your writing is fine. I've read much worse, so please don't stop. This is a good story and you should finish it. Worse comes to worse you can always go back and rewrite it, but at least finish it first.

You are doing a good job. Writing takes practice to perfect. Don't give up.

Aw, lovely fluff!

I think that ur writing is great! and plus u cant just leave a story halfway for like 2 years! now thats just unfair!

Please don't quit now! Its so frustrating for a good story to be abandoned. I like your story the way it is and you'll develop as a writer as you go along.

Ah. I've never been excited when reading a story and find out that there are no more chapters as of now. . . . And that is saying alot, it was a weird chapter, but it was cute usually I would think it was corny and be like it's dumb, but I liked it, it was good. Update soon please

This has been interesting chapter. You are doing a good job on this story. Do not give up. Keep smiling. :-)More please!

So that's his sister oh that's a first for me, you need to update soon please thank you very much

I really am enjoying this story. I stumbled on it this morning after I had a dream about the labyrinth last night. I've always wondered what would happen if the love story had been allowed to continue. You're doing a good job with story development, etc. I get bored easily, and this is holding my interest, so good job!

i love it so update soon

An interesting story, and I look forward to reading more of it!

This story is so cool! Please keep writting!

Interesting and cool chapter. Thank you for sharing it. Have a good weekend. Keep smiling. :-)