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so...
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
okay, it's been nearly a year since this story was last updated. as it's anniversary present to me, I WANNA MORE! that is all. thank you.
onewhowatches
2009-10-08 . chapter 2
i like this. you've hit something here, something very good. ^^ keep it up, and update soon.

and, as my name states, i WILL be watching. XD

signed,

onewhowatches :3
ed the devil
2009-08-15 . chapter 2
that was good it was wrote out nicely and you have great potial as an autour so i can't wait for the nxt chapter to come out i give you 3 stars *_*_*

i am a cridict not a autor or speller
Devilishduck
2009-08-01 . chapter 2
I really like how you end with Lori's game simulation, telling us EXACTLY where their relationship stands. (A lot of the time, in the manga, it's rather vague)

Update soon!
strawrawbeby
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
very sweet! I liked how the game reflects Lori's thoughts/ wishes
A Midsummer Night's Dream
2009-07-02 . chapter 2
Ara...interesting.But weird enough, I love the MioxKatsuki pairing here than Kyoko and Ren.
L
2009-06-21 . chapter 2
I think it's really unrealistic that an ending time would be announced. I mean, what if they got a lot of NGs? Then they'd probably take longer right? ... But then again, they have to make appointments for ie. interviews around their work schedule. But I still think that they'd only give an approximate ending time. It just struck me as a bit odd.

But I love the bit about her palpable aura and the others backing away. Made me laugh to think of her little demons. :)
stupid thing
2009-06-17 . chapter 2
Hi
I can see Lori doing this. I really can see it and then he has to wait playing this love game.
so now back to study.
bye
your stupid thing
Frost Merry Darkness Luver
2009-06-08 . chapter 2
One slight story gap, what are you going to do with mio's cousin, if it's a spinoff? She can't completely disappear, at the least you have to acknowledge her as katsuki's former love!
Kara
2009-06-04 . chapter 2
This story grabs my interests.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
Ashlyn Darke
2009-06-02 . chapter 2
He made them into video game characters?!?!
Sounds like the president alright.
I like this chapter! Keep it up!

~Ashlyn
wind-master-redmoon
2009-06-01 . chapter 2
glad you got some inspiration. i do believe i will enjoy how this turns out.
my name is paper YAH
2009-06-01 . chapter 2
woah. that game i weird. i wonder if there is a real game like that...
Keoi
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
O interesting plot
Namikaze naruko14
2009-05-31 . chapter 2
wow interesting story. hope you update soon!
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