 so... 2009-11-06 . chapter 2 okay, it's been nearly a year since this story was last updated. as it's anniversary present to me, I WANNA MORE! that is all. thank you. |
 onewhowatches 2009-10-08 . chapter 2i like this. you've hit something here, something very good. ^^ keep it up, and update soon.
and, as my name states, i WILL be watching. XD
signed,
onewhowatches :3 |
 ed the devil 2009-08-15 . chapter 2that was good it was wrote out nicely and you have great potial as an autour so i can't wait for the nxt chapter to come out i give you 3 stars *_*_*
i am a cridict not a autor or speller |
 Devilishduck 2009-08-01 . chapter 2I really like how you end with Lori's game simulation, telling us EXACTLY where their relationship stands. (A lot of the time, in the manga, it's rather vague)
Update soon! |
 strawrawbeby 2009-07-06 . chapter 2very sweet! I liked how the game reflects Lori's thoughts/ wishes |
 A Midsummer Night's Dream 2009-07-02 . chapter 2Ara...interesting.But weird enough, I love the MioxKatsuki pairing here than Kyoko and Ren. |
 L 2009-06-21 . chapter 2 I think it's really unrealistic that an ending time would be announced. I mean, what if they got a lot of NGs? Then they'd probably take longer right? ... But then again, they have to make appointments for ie. interviews around their work schedule. But I still think that they'd only give an approximate ending time. It just struck me as a bit odd.
But I love the bit about her palpable aura and the others backing away. Made me laugh to think of her little demons. :) |
 stupid thing 2009-06-17 . chapter 2Hi
I can see Lori doing this. I really can see it and then he has to wait playing this love game.
so now back to study.
bye
your stupid thing |
 Frost Merry Darkness Luver 2009-06-08 . chapter 2One slight story gap, what are you going to do with mio's cousin, if it's a spinoff? She can't completely disappear, at the least you have to acknowledge her as katsuki's former love! |
 Kara 2009-06-04 . chapter 2 This story grabs my interests.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^^ |
 Ashlyn Darke 2009-06-02 . chapter 2He made them into video game characters?!?!
Sounds like the president alright.
I like this chapter! Keep it up!
~Ashlyn |
 wind-master-redmoon 2009-06-01 . chapter 2glad you got some inspiration. i do believe i will enjoy how this turns out. |
 my name is paper YAH 2009-06-01 . chapter 2woah. that game i weird. i wonder if there is a real game like that... |
 Keoi 2009-05-31 . chapter 2O interesting plot |
 Namikaze naruko14 2009-05-31 . chapter 2wow interesting story. hope you update soon! |