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Nr.Six
2006-02-10
ch 5,
abuseWow, really cool how you described Cordelia's
feelings when she had to go into her old Queen
behaviour.

Oe, the camera's in the suite!What is going to
happen?!I am going to read further very quickly!!

You are very creative!!
Nr.Six
2006-02-10
ch 1,
abuseO!I love your story!It's so romantic!I can't wait
to find out what happens next!
The scene with Angel asking Cordelia how he looks
is so funny!I could just see it happening!
Michele L
2002-10-16
ch 1,
abuseI thought this story was amazing. It was funny and romantic. I loved it. And I love your writing. Keep writing and I'll keep coming back for more! Great job!
Talia Ali
2002-03-01
ch 11,
abuseVery nice. You write well and true to the story. I'm enthusiastic. I don't strictly like the A/C matchup, but you made it much more believable than most do. I liked your plotline. Thanks!
Sirus
2002-01-21
ch 11, anon.
abuseFunny , accurate and great I had to read the whole thing in one go !!!!!
Kudos !
PS a sequal would be great
Christine
2002-01-14
ch 11, anon.
abuseThis story was fantastic
secret oktober
2001-12-23
ch 11,
abuseOUTSTANDING ! Wow, I'm just at a loss for words. I couldn't stop reading once I started.
The angst, the love, the naughty fun. You are a truly excellent writer. The characters were so true to form I thought I was reading an Angel Script. Well done.
Leinne Seereth
2001-11-30
ch 11, anon.
abuseWait, wait, wait. Didn't Faith die? Or did I miss something? Um, okay, story's good, writing's good, but I noticed coupla spelling errors you might want to fix. Like, quiet instead of quite, that sort of thing. I do wish it'd been F/W though *pouts* But you did F/G wonderfully. Yeah, liked it whole bunches.
Tra
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseWow.... just.. well, wow's pretty much all I can say.

Dang! You've got to be the BEST A/C writer I've ever read. Please write more! :)
Celeste
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseFabulous ending!!!! LOL I definitely didn't expect Faith, or Wesley's apology. It was unexpected and fitting and sweet, so it was perfect. :) Great story!
AlexisPryce
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseWowie! Good lord...I've been riveted to this story since I first read it. I thought perhaps I'd like just the fact that Angel was a stripper, but my obsession with 'Hungry Eyes' grew to be much stronger. You write excellent and witty dialogue that just adds that extra "umph" that a Fan Fic needs. And with this sort of Wesley/Faith pairing in the end? Totally unexpected! Kudos to you, Chika for a wonderful end to your wonderful story!
Cathrine
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is one of the best A/C stories that i have ever read!!!! The waiting (4 the end chapters) was worth it and the story was put 2 justice. It was fantastically written and i enjoyed every min of it!!! (as i am a big A/C shipper) Im sorry but u have got 2 write another A/C story soon cause u r just the best A/C writter that i have seen around - so please write another A/C story,
Lv Cat. xxxxxxxxxxxxx
wickedangelicdevil (sorry d...
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseexcellent, humorous and well written!
Emily
2001-11-29
ch 11, anon.
abuseThis was such a great story!!! You have to keep writing esp. about Angel and Cordy!!!!!!!!
AndreaLyn
2001-11-29
ch 11,
abuseI loved the story, every part, but I think my favourite had to be the final. It was so chock full of emotion and just plain wonderful! More from you would be great! :)
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