|Reviews for Learning To Swim|
| AliceLikeFireflies 3/3/12 . chapter 1
Aw! - I love!
| Mariana Su 7/23/10 . chapter 1
I loved it. I had great fun reading the story.
| OPi 7/15/10 . chapter 1
| Ella Not Lotte 4/11/10 . chapter 1
JASPER! You have officially re-awoken the fangirl in me. I was never the one who claimed Edward for myself, I called Jasper. Of course, this was back forever ago, when the book series wasn't really all that popular, and I was still a fanatical fan. But the Jasper flag is flying, or at least the Jasper as-written-by-you flag. Of course, Edward would be more of an up-himself prig about it, but I thought that it was just so adorable that he was going to test himself by hugging her. He reminds me of your Tom, what with his hesitance at physical contact (for different reasons entirely), and his struggle not to kill someone he cares about (different types of caring, to be certain, but still). Ack, he's just so... much. Almost too much. My fangirly senses are starting to send me into hyperdrive. Oh, well. There goes sleep out the window. 'Tis a shame, for I love sleep dearly, but I love me some tortured well-written characters better.
Hmm.. I think I'm going to go find something else of yours to read. Or maybe re-read your trilogy, starting with Rewind/Backtrack. Keep up the good work.
The dignity is returning, albeit slowly. And there's not much of it, although there wasn't much to begin with. I've never been opposed to begging and pouting... And as I've done more than enough begging for today... *pouts*
| Joshly 7/15/09 . chapter 1
that was actually really good:-)
| Fernsfairie 6/13/09 . chapter 1
Aw... It's so cute! BxJ is not my favorite relationship, but's not horrible.
| girl278 2/6/09 . chapter 1
Aww! that is so so cute!
| becca xx 2/4/09 . chapter 1
i loved it
carry on writing
| Dazzle Me Again 2/1/09 . chapter 1
Aw, I loved that last paragraph. It was so sweet! And when he asked her if he could hug her, too.
I loved this.
| Anonymous 1/11/09 . chapter 1
This is SO cute & funny. I love it
| z 12/31/08 . chapter 1
It was really good!
| xoheartinohioxo 12/30/08 . chapter 1
*squee!* I love Bella/Jasper friendship stories like this! This was very nicely done, very in character for everyone I'd say!
| ME LOVEY JAZZY 12/20/08 . chapter 1
I KNEW HE HAD IT IN HIM! -sobs- I would have trusted him the second he asked me. But then again my partial obsession with him may or may not have something to do with it! Nice work! I love it!
-ME LOVEY JAZZY
| Lady Eve 12/17/08 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I don't even have to imagine the tension as Jasper hugged Bella, you described it so well. Thank you for writing a wonderful fic.
| hobbitsaresexy 12/17/08 . chapter 1
I liked it
Good job :)