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M E Wofford 11/30/08 . chapter 2Oh, good exciting chapter! More please! |
Bethany Cullen 11/29/08 . chapter 1good |
Megan Bayne 11/29/08 . chapter 1 aww. sweet! this is awesome! :) it! |
coffee4106 11/28/08 . chapter 1awe that is so sweet. i love it.. keep going, this will be excellent! |
ErikaaDiLante 11/28/08 . chapter 1awesome. please add another chapter soon! |
scottiedog 11/28/08 . chapter 1Please continue, I am really enjoying this! Good Job! |
anon 11/28/08 . chapter 1 You can't tell family relationships from fingerprints - it's not like DNA. And if Tony is only three years older than his sister when she is kidnapped, and she's 17 now, that means that Tony is only 20, which is impossible. And it would help if you didn't mix up quite so many homonyms. |