 BittersweetSummer 2009-08-24 . chapter 1I love the dynamics between Astoria and Narcissa. It was a lovely read. The parallels between Lucius/Narcissa and Draco/Astoria were nice too.
I especially love the bit at the end with Draco and Astoria. Very sweet, especially the last line.
Very well done!
:D |
 Spark your Creativity 2009-08-22 . chapter 1Really good, lots of emotion and you can feel their happiness :)
Can't wait to read more of your stories! |
 Drishti Choudhury 2009-07-27 . chapter 1Merlin, again with the eye prickling! Really, your stories are so heartfelt, every one I read causes major eye-prickling. Good job! :) |
 David Fishwick 2008-12-02 . chapter 1Excellent idea and I liked their conversation. Thanks for writing. |
 Ice-princess-Natalie 2008-11-28 . chapter 1I love this story. love it love it |