i hope you do come out of haitus soon. i love it. i'm clinging onto every word.

wow Kira vs The Doctor keep writing this its crazy and if you have given up could you give it to someone who can

GRooVY GRaVY aND FaBBiTY FaB CHaPTeRS!!
BTW:-YES! YES! AND THRICE YES! I've finally got round to Death Notes! I still haven't watched the proper Japanese D.N. movie, but yeah... So I'm finally in the know! HEEHAW!
Had to go back, rifle through FF and read this again, cos I couldn't remember it properly! lol. But now I've read it, and am proper Death Note OBSESSED, I understand everything and am not confuzzled bout stuff... Light always was and always will be a cocky, kinda evil, practicallty obsessed weirdo, butyou still gotta LOVE HIM. I lurve Ryuk even more, and his obsession with APPLES! The Shinigami Realm sounds well CHEESES though! Me wants to go there... =P
You got all their characters down FABBILY and BRILLIANTLY!!
EVERYTHING's totally BRILLOPADS!
=D =D =D =D

Awesome I can't wait for the Doctor's reaction to seeing Rem.

Uh oh. Poor rose if Light ever finds out her name. But then again, I don't think it's LIGHT Rose and the Doctor need to worry about do they? What about Misa? She doesn't even need to look her victims face to face like Light does in order to get a persons name? Thanks to her special Shinigami eyes, she just needs to just look at a person from any angle to get the info she needs.

But wait if it's 2004, isn't this also the year Rose should have started her adventures with the Doctor, and if it is, WHEN in 2004 are they between now and the time Past Rose is destined to meet the Doctor? *lol* If it is the right year, I think both ROse's are going to die...

This is getting interesting, but how come the TARDIS didn't translate shinigami?

that was good, good glad you did well in exams hope i did the same when the report comes out over summer well done on this chapter

Interesting! I liked Rose's reaction to Misa's confinement, because I think that, even if The Doctor is going along with it, there's a large part of him that doesn't want to; and that's why he likes Rose so much, because she /can't/ force her compassion aside. Thanks muchly for posting it up, even if it isn't finished. If you would like I could beta this chapter for you; unfortunately there is no way on this earth that I can start that this week. I'd really like to help out if I can, but if that wait is too long, then good luck with the final version & what have you. I'll be keeping a look out for it.

Best wishes,
~Schermionie

Wow,congrats on the awsome scores!
This story is brilliant,you keep writing!
=]

Ooh! Cannot wait for the next chapter. Ha ha, trust Rose to act like that, eh? Question: Are all the Death Note pairings canon? Just out of curiosity.

You know how hard it is to find a decent crossover fanfiction? You just made my day a bit easier. ^_^

Yay, update! I loved the mini-'oops-just-missed-you' scene.

O... that conversation (between Light and the Doctor) was hard to read...

Love'n it!

Ah, mindgames... This was really good, and I'm glad you rewrote the mindgames. The only problem I can se is that Light is falling for the Doctor's traps too easily, but that could be because the Doctor is 903 years old, and he's way smarter than Light. Can't wait for your next chapter!
Traitor-Hero

Yet another great chapter! Whilst perhaps not my favourite one, the quality of the writing is superb, and Light and The Doctor's interactions were both a little scary and wonderful to observe. I'd thought for one moment that they'd left just in time, but Light sneakily found them anyway. I'm worrying about Rose now, hopefully the TARDIS can comfort them both.

The only problem is that I'm not quite sure how The Doctor tricked Light (for I am both dull-witted and tired), and I don't think that it was presented very clearly - though this might just be me. Other than that there's nothing else I can really say, apart from that I'm glad you found the challenge of this fun rather than horrible, since that means you'll be more likely to want to continue. xD.

Thanks for the enjoyable chapter!

Very interesting confrontation, hoping to read more soon.